private-only, back-to-posting, private-only... let's see how long this survives this time.

May 16, 2008 12:11

Okay, well, screw it, here, fic. *drops and goes back into hiding* No idea what I did there. Or why. Or how. All I know it's damned angsty and I wish it weren't, all I hope is if this is only remotely in character, as far as it can be, some parts I *hope* are not. All I wonder is, What the fucking pink and glittery heck is this? Me, torturing ( Read more... )

david villa, fan fiction, evil weasel strikes again, david silva

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faeen May 16 2008, 12:13:40 UTC
*moans*

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faeen May 16 2008, 12:17:21 UTC
more proper now. i love you so very much. this.. this is absolutely wonderful. its.. imo, perfectly in character. the descriptions, the emotions, the thoughts.

although angsty, there's a bit of happiness here, my heart goes *thud* here:
he decides he wants you
Maybe he was just introducing himself. (But he wasn’t, and this you know, too. It is a fine line, really.)

this feels so real. and.. gah. i've lost words.

unlock it honey, so that i can rec it.

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fade_out_child May 16 2008, 12:57:23 UTC
... *fails words* merci. ...unlocked.

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arenieceida May 16 2008, 14:17:12 UTC
came via faeen.

this is.. beautiful. the angst. it squeezed my heart dry. but the small sense of hope there. is so worth it.

as is clicking on faeen's rec. your fic deserve to be read. thank you.

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fade_out_child May 16 2008, 16:16:18 UTC
oh, thank you :D

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nahco3 May 16 2008, 15:16:12 UTC
Really great! (I don't mind you mentioned his wife - it needs to be said, I think.)

ANd no, there is no way to write fluffy DV. I've tried.

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fade_out_child May 16 2008, 16:17:05 UTC
thank you!

But ey, don't shatter my hopes :(

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faeen May 16 2008, 16:02:29 UTC
wait.. are you asking for prompts?

do you watch star wars?

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fade_out_child May 16 2008, 16:15:34 UTC
what me? ha ha, I need months to finish one story (this one took a YEAR), don't think anyone would have the patience to wait for that LOL
it was more me asking if anyone would be able to write fluff!villa >< sorry

(and I have only watched episode I. why, did you want to ask me for some crack? :P XD)

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faeen May 19 2008, 03:45:48 UTC
Lol. Was hoping you'd write JediMaster!Villa and Padawan!Silva. But it's okay. :D

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fade_out_child May 19 2008, 10:50:06 UTC
Ahahaha, I'd have loved to, but I don't think I'd manage, don't know enough, sorry :( XD

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dyingseasons May 17 2008, 03:27:20 UTC
This is good! I liked it :)

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fade_out_child May 17 2008, 20:17:08 UTC
Aww, thank you! :)
Did I just delete that accidentally? Eh, how tired can one person be? X.x

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