5th in the night ficlet series

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for diskarte, because she begged for more fic. preread by the wifey (<3!), so it can't be that bad :)

Comments

[arenieceida]

This is lovely, Sarah..
The first sentence knocks me off my feet. The fact that I have two Davids on the beach building sandcastles in my mind's eye.. it is such a strong picture. The inner voice? Awesome. The contradicting of adults/teenagers there and..
It hurts. In the way that only these two can.

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Thanks a lot, Anis :) I love your comments. I was in a very strange mood when I wrote it, so it's good to hear something good came out of it.

[faeen]

Win.

Your writings Sarah.. I love it. This is BEAUTIFUL prosaic that its almost poetic (not making sense here). The words..are lovely. But most of all I love that something's happening here. Making sandcastles (making love), being confused (being in love).

Thank you for this. Fics like this is why DV/DS is something special. ♥

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gsafasjkfhjksa i love you leen, end of reply. ♥ must write fic for you too. remind me. nag me.

[faeen]

I love you too! :D
And yay! I shall nag. You just wait.

[deftonsita]

woa... this is ♥
i really like it

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Many thanks! :)

[dyingseasons]

Lovely :)

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Thank you, Yeye :)

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:D