Rough draft I'll expand and make it better later... tell me what you think

[fadeddreams04]

Alone I sit and knell in the black icy corner of my room, with my eyes closed and lungs gasping for one last chilly breath of air. No matter if my eyes are open or closed the only images that I see are that of torture and death. I scream to the lord that has given me nothing in my life for some peace and a view of an angel. Just something,

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Aww Babe.

[uter_konfusion]

"In my mind plays the images of torture and death and I realize that what my life is going to be; dead, alone and tortured by those around me"

Your not dead. Your not alone. And you certainly will never be tortured by me, ever. Matty, your amazing. I'm still smiling. I am happy. And that, is why you are amazing.

"Dead and alone I will always be, until the day an angel enters my life."

Baby, one day. You will find that angel and that angel will make you the happiest person alive. She will make you feel SO special, just like you deserve.

<3

[angeliciously]

your work is truly incredible Matt. <3 i am so impresed with you.

[doubledvideo]

nice work.

~decker

[anonymous]

I don't know if you wrote that, but if you did, then hats off to ya. I want to say it was beautiful, but maybe that word isn't quite appropriate, so let's just say it was really very provocative, and deep. You're quite intelligable and there is iron in the words you wrote, and therefore must be iron inside you. There are many who feel a certain way, and some who can say it, and very few who can show it... you did a good job showing it. you rock.

[gizmo16226]

wow, you wrote exactly how i feel...thats so crazy.

maybe you are the angel that enters my life so i wont be so sad anymore! you are awesome! =-)

<3 Shana