a comforting lie (can't last) - claire bennet - heroes - fanfiction

Nov 20, 2007 10:46

Title: a comforting lie (can't last)
Rating: R
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: n/a
Word Count: 854
Spoilers: Technically up to 2x08, with speculation for 2x09.
Summary: her eyes slide shut to stop the tears and then she’s simply gone.
Note: This was one of those ideas I had to get off my chest. I think something like this might actually spice up Claire ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, ch: lyle bennet, *r, ch: claire bennet, - heroes, ch: jackie wilcox

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 00:35:27 UTC
Haha, thank you! That means alot to me. :D Glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 00:38:26 UTC
Thank you so much! :D I'm really glad you liked it. ♥

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lostdreamer56 November 20 2007, 00:43:01 UTC
SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I MISS JESS!FIC!!!!!! Wow, all of it is so lovely and heartbreaking and just gah... I don't want it to be true (I don't, it can't, I won't believe it until they how me the death with my own two eyes; no, I won't).

This is gorgeous! I love this idea. It would definitely work with the idea they brought up last week about gaining these powers has unforeseen consequences on the mind.

Just, gah! I'm so speechless right now because it's so good!

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 00:48:24 UTC
Aww gosh, thank you so much hon! I'm sooo glad you liked it! It'd be interesting if something like this happened on the show. It's unlikely, but I can still fic. ;) I'm still hoping everyone goes home and lives happily ever after with NO DEATHES! Is that too much to ask for Kring? :(

But seriously, THANK YOU. You've made my day. ♥

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lostdreamer56 November 20 2007, 00:51:12 UTC
It's gorgeous. How could I not love it?

And no deaths, I agree! Because I am going to cry. And I don't want to cry again. :(

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 00:52:52 UTC
Aww. ♥

It's going to be heartbreaking. :( Why can't they bring in a character I loathe and kill them off instead dammit?!

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 01:19:05 UTC
Aww, thank you so much Kallie! I'm really glad you liked it. ♥

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made_in_ink November 20 2007, 11:02:57 UTC
OMFG!!! DUDE!!! This is all kinds of awesome. I love the whole idea behind this story but it was so beautifully executed. When Bob explained Jessica to Nikki last week I was thinking 'I wonder why it didn't happen to any of the others...' espiecially ones with more 'traumatic' powers than superstrength. In my mind Claire's powers have to be one of the most traumatic (the way shes handled it is testiment to how well HRG and Sandra raised her), I mean seriously doesn't get more traumatic than waking up in the middle of your own autopsy.

The Jackie choice also was fucking perfect! It is so perfect that I wish I had thought of it myself.

Lyle also seriously needs to be like that in the show. He seems like he's taken over Noah's role of head of the family and Claire's protector.

Guh! Seriously, I've been missing your fic so much and this was soooo spot on and compelling. *huggles you*

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 11:09:33 UTC
Aww, thank you soooo much! I'm seriously so glad you liked it, it means the world to me. :D I wondered as well why it only happened to Niki. Claire's power is extremely traumatic, and I'm surprised Peter is sprouting multiple personalities from his ass! ;)

Hee, Jackie seemed like the perfect fit. She's dead, she and Claire were best friends, and Niki's other personalities have been very volatile, dangerous women, and Jackie seemed to fit that pretty well. :D I'm glad you thought it was a good fit!

I'm dying for Lyle to get more of a storyline, and I think he would step up in the case of Noah's death. :( Well I hope so anyway!

Aww, seriously thanks! *huggles back*

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made_in_ink November 20 2007, 12:00:13 UTC
I'm surprised Peter is sprouting multiple personalities from his ass!
You're telling me! He's the kind of dude who should be arguing with himself in elevators!!!

Poor little Lyle. I hope he gets a power that totally pwns!!

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sparkfading November 20 2007, 12:02:40 UTC
LOL, I would freaking pay to see Peter talking to himself in an elevator, swear to god. That'd be freaking hilarious!!

TOTALLY. :D Something he can throw in Claire's face when she's bugging him. ;)

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