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fadewiththesong

Morning People - Of Frustration and Fights

Feb 08, 2008 20:32

Title: Morning People
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: When Lily said that she would rather spend the summer with anyone other than her sister, she did not mean to include James Potter.
Characters: James, Lily, Sirius, some necessary OCs
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: James/Lily
Word Count: 2600
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: Feedback is very much ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, genre: romance, character: sirius black, story: morning people, fandom: harry potter, pairing: james/lily, character: lily evans, character: james potter

Comments 13

sheylalove February 9 2008, 05:19:19 UTC

I really liked this chapter! :)

Keep it up!

fadewiththesong February 9 2008, 15:33:40 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

made_of_toast February 9 2008, 10:47:29 UTC

Love the story so far! Can't wait to read more!

fadewiththesong February 9 2008, 15:34:16 UTC

Thanks so much for reading!

deadrana February 9 2008, 16:22:10 UTC

I'm enjoying this story so much! I can't wait for the next update.

I like the fluctuations in Lily and James' interactions with each other. One moment civil, the next minute screaming... Let's hope they learn to control themselves soon :)

fadewiththesong February 9 2008, 20:05:36 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Lily and James should be slightly more controlled in the future. Slightly.

deadrana February 9 2008, 22:19:56 UTC

Well, if they learned to maintain their control totally they just wouldn't be Lily and James, now would they? *grins*

fadewiththesong February 10 2008, 18:02:29 UTC

Very true.

pleasee anonymous February 26 2008, 18:31:39 UTC

update!!!!!!!

hope you rosiebudbud February 26 2008, 18:37:41 UTC

carry on soon, you've got the characters spot on.
Why does James like to cook?
that is the question.

Re: hope you fadewiththesong February 26 2008, 20:24:56 UTC

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. As for James liking to cook... I can't answer that yet. Unless the story changes drastically, it should be revealed in later chapters. Weirdly enough, it's kind of a significant thing. I know it's a strange thing to be significant, but it is (or it will be).