Skipping From Class - Harry Potter

Apr 05, 2008 15:41

Title: Skipping From Class
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: You don’t just proclaim your hate for a person for six years and then suddenly go up to that person and say "Hey! You’ve suddenly become quite fancy-able with your wonderful personality and lovely bum, so why don’t we go snog like mad?"
Characters: Lily, James
Rating: PG
Pairings: Lily/James 
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genre: humor, fandom: harry potter, pairing: james/lily, rating: pg, character: lily evans, character: james potter, genre: romance

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fadewiththesong April 6 2008, 15:14:21 UTC
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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smartamy15 April 5 2008, 23:41:55 UTC
You have a very humorous writing style, and I thoroughly enjoyed the banter between James and Lily. Very good job! :)

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fadewiththesong April 6 2008, 15:25:13 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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balatro_jester April 6 2008, 04:32:36 UTC
that was amazing! I like how well rounded and distinguishable their characters were with so few words. It was lovely!

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fadewiththesong April 6 2008, 15:26:20 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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talloakslady April 6 2008, 17:24:51 UTC
This was really fun. I loved the drawn out questioning of Lily, and inner dialog she has with herself. James, I couldn't figure out if he was playing with her or just ignorant at the beginning. I also liked the cataloging of his defects switching over to assets.

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fadewiththesong April 7 2008, 13:57:02 UTC
Thanks. And well, I pretty much thought of James as ignorant at the beginning although he suspected/hoped it was him once he found out it was someone in their Transfiguration class. Although you can always interpret it as if he knew if you want. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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talloakslady April 7 2008, 22:15:38 UTC
I did suspect James figured out he was the person, but just had to tease Lily a bit. Your story was a really wonderful Canon story.

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rainsoulx April 7 2008, 08:29:44 UTC
I don't usually read Lily/James fics, but I fancied this one!
Your Lily is really funny, and I like the fast rythm you gave to the story.

"Oh, sod it. I’m dancing back to common room."

That line was marvellous!
Dialogues are very nice. Another extremely fanciable piece!

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fadewiththesong April 7 2008, 13:59:19 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I think the first piece of fan fiction I every read was Lily/James so I have a bit of a soft spot for the two of them. I think they're quite fanciable. And thanks for reading even though you don't normally read Lily/James.

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