Comments | faelinn: Reality and Desire, Sheppard/McKay fic

faelinn

Reality and Desire, Sheppard/McKay fic

Jun 02, 2007 22:14

Title: Reality and Desire
Author: faelinn
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Slash
Warnings: Explicit sex, language, etc.
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Disclaimer: They’re not mine.
Summary/Author’s Note: John surprises Rodney in several ways.

( Read more... )

sga, fic, sheppard/mckay

Comments 27

horatioslover June 3 2007, 16:11:04 UTC

..........*is speechless*

Wow. I don't even know what to say. That was hot and uh um I don't even know what else. I loved this, and I love how John surprised even me along with Rodney.

XD Two thumbs up!

faelinn June 3 2007, 18:11:26 UTC

Aww, your speechlessness itself is such a great compliment! Thank you! And I'm so glad that John surprised you 'cause that was pretty much what I was hoping would happen. :)

Thank you again! I'm glad you liked the fic!

catheights June 4 2007, 03:55:06 UTC

This fic had me mesmerized. It was hot but with such a dark edge, a well done combination. Excellent writing.

faelinn June 4 2007, 04:16:25 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased to hear that it worked out okay in the end! Like I do with every fic, I spent way too much time stressing over this, so that's quite reassuring to me. *relieved* :)

Thanks again! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading! :)

melagan June 4 2007, 11:22:19 UTC

I couldn't tear my eyes away from this. I like my boys warm and cozy as much as the next porn floozy but I loved darker edge of John here. And you did it without taking it too far making him some kind of psychopath. Thank You!

Rodney finally just sighs and pulls John closer to him. Grinning, John lets his eyes drift close. He doesn’t tell Rodney how long it’s been, how much he’s missed the unique feel of a man touching him, how hard it is to ignore what he knows his body wants

This really pulled it together and make it work wonderfully well for me

faelinn June 4 2007, 20:40:16 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! I'm quite a fan of the warm and cozy stuff, too, but somehow I always end up writing fics that are a bit darker. It's odd. :D I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic!

And it's really nice to know you liked that particular part. I threw it in at the last moment because the ending just didn't feel right, and I thought it turned out so much better with that addition. :)

Glad you liked and thanks for commenting!

luthien June 4 2007, 13:29:45 UTC

This is a really interesting John perspective, and perspective of John. The end totally makes it. Thanks, I liked this a lot.

faelinn June 4 2007, 20:45:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm always curious about looking at characters in different ways, but I sometimes worry I take things too far. It's quite nice to know this one worked out. :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic and thank you again!

*applauds* lishel_fracrium June 5 2007, 22:33:51 UTC

I love your writing err voice I guess is there word for it. the sex was hot and well written and the voices were well done. the plot was okay but I would really love to see more mcshep writing from you. your awesome! please?

Re: *applauds* faelinn June 6 2007, 01:11:49 UTC

Thank you! :) I'm glad you like my writing! *happy* I'll probably write some more of this pairing again, since it's really starting to grow on me. I believe I actually have about half of another fic with these two in it already written, so hopefully I'll have that to post soon.

Thanks again! :)