Endless, Ch. 3

[new_evolution]

Title: Endless
Rating: PG
Summary: "It was written that I would come see you."
Authors' Notes: I'm not quite as happy with this chapter as I am with the first two. I dunno. Thoughts?
Disclaimer: Don't own, didn't happen.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Comments

[anonymous]

I've been following this story (btw, thank you for writing/posting it) and I think its a good chapter. Very nicely done, and not over-done; or I guess I mean over-wrought (over-written maybe??). Not that the previous two were either, but sometimes you think something should be longer, or you wanted to write more, but really, the story just takes as much space as it needs.

Nicely done, is the point I am winding my way towards. *grin*

Looking forward to seeing who visits the others. *duhn-duhn-DUHN!*

[new_evolution]

Thanks very much. Guessing who visits the others, I would think, is fairly easy with a knowledge of Sandman and a bit of the ol' process of elimination.

[whatchamacall1t]

yesssssssss.

you are one killer person for ending sentences, i have to tell you.

i really like this series. sorry i'm so late, i haven't been online. but i'm going to part four now, and i'm exciiiiited. :D