You must have READ LIKE THE WIND, I am very impressed :) Thank you so much! (I <3 Ariadne too. I really enjoyed piecing together in my head what HER thoughts and actions were throughout this, especially the things that Arthur never saw.)
This was just so incredible. I guess the word I would use to describe it is complete? Like, it was so perfectly constructed and finished. Idk, I just really enjoyed this, especially the little details like Arthur's french accent being a product of Mal's friendship (♥!) Characterisation was amazing, as usual, and I especially enjoyed Heather. "Arthur is translucent to these people, that they have been watching him and unpicking him and wanting him anyway." That was perfect.
The artwork is flawless, too. I absolutely adore it!
Heh, if it is not finished after that many bloody words, there is not much hope for me :) Heather was great fun to invent, I really enjoy using OCs in minor roles. Thanks so much for the comment.
Here from apiphile's lj and I have to say, one of my absolute favorite things about Inception, is the absolutely brilliant fic its inspired. This is way up there. Thanks!
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Also, I <3 Ariadne!
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The artwork is flawless, too. I absolutely adore it!
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