Ficlet - Distraction

Apr 10, 2006 20:33

I hope Chrisie doesn't mind this one. My first real Éde-fanverse plotbunny demanded to be written all the while I was doing science homework ( Read more... )

fandom: tolkien, sedeverse, writing

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gwathlo April 11 2006, 14:26:19 UTC
<3. So much. Particularly, "Maybe I looked at him and knocked him over the rail. Perhaps I waved my hand in his direction and so killed..." Very, very Heculo thing to say. :3 Also <3 '"If your friend values his life in the slightest, he will not be where I believe he is." Her step faltered for a second.' even more, and the last line is just 'mazing.

As to the confession: I doubt you need to wait ten years. Give it two at most. Personally, I already think you rival me easily. But you're probably going to dismiss that as biased, anyway. Ah well, at least you know I think it. And once more, <3 the ficlet. ^^

"No fic written from Heculo's point of view could possibly be G." XD

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failivrin April 11 2006, 16:14:23 UTC
You do me too much credit. >.>

I thought maybe Heculo's 'Maybe I looked at him ...' comment was a little flippant for him. I suppose not. Whoo, for I can sort of do this right!
That is, if you aren't exaggerating to spare my fragile ego. :P

The main point I'm annoyed over is that I can't seem to stop going all urple and using too many words to describe something. That's why I like your writing style. It's pretty and descriptive, but also concise.

As to Heculo and G-rated fics... Oxymoron, much? The guy's so emo. In the modern-slang way, not the actual emo. XP

*bowgrovelworship*,
Missa

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