runaway

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I'm just experimenting with a new writing style and it's obviously not perfect yet.

Title: Runaway
Characters: Harry Potter
Notes: Dark, Series of Drabbles

Comments

[annearchy]

Whoa. Major extreme angst. Very stream-of-consciousness. It has a really breathless quality, like he's actually running while he's thinking. It's a little bit ragged stylistically, but then Harry is a bit ragged now (end of 5th year?), isn't he? Nice work overall, highly evocative.