gymnopedie

[fake__flowers]

i haven't written anything for months. it was nice to sit back for a couple hours in front of my computer screen with nothing but a blank page. i guess i could say i'm kind of happy with the result? not my best, just okay.

Comments

[predestination_]

I'm glad that gymnopedie no. 1 did wonders with your writing.
I knew it would, which is why I sent it to you.
It flows nicely.

[predestination_]

el-oh-el
Just kidding. This poem SUCKED more dick than you do.

p.s. I'll call you around 12 tomorrow.

[__resolution]

i love this a lot.

[joe________also]

i know for a fact its IMPOSSIBLE to drown in pearls

youre crazy

[fake__flowers]

what if they filled up your mouth and clogged up your nose?

you'd probably suffocate.
pft. you're the crazy one.

megggggan

[thesummersun]

i think this is really good.
you have an amazing way of describing things
like the words/vocab. you use are amazing.
i completely could like picture everything.
you win at life.

[joe________also]

your so full of shit.....i have small nostrils and i dont put pearls in my mouth

and who the fuck would put pearls in your nose and mouth

or how else would they get there

... im sure the tapioca balls from big straw would work

alot less in the moo-la department

[_skinreceiver]

I like it a lot. It's pretty. It reminds me of this artist's studio that was in this apartment building that my mom used to manage. She had such a pretty place. And for some reason it made me think of it.

[chemikills]

disenagrating rain reminds me of your eyesssssss~!!!!!!!! haha.

[fake__flowers]

hahah.

watching the rain disenagrate off my porch reminds me of your beautiful eyes.

man, that'd definitely win me over.

[joe________also]

then... errr.

watching the rain disenagrate off my porch reminds me of your beautiful eyes

yeah i totally won you over

now get on me ho!

[fake__flowers]

hm..

wait.

it didn't work.
dang.

try harder next time, gosh.
or just have your helmet wearing raptor deliver me a message.