"Us and Them"

Jun 20, 2010 14:39


 Dated: Sometime this month

Title: Us and Them

Rating: Uh, PG? Some description of violence, nothing serious

Summary: Introspective look at the closing events of "Half Measures" and "Full Measure" (Tons of spoilers for those who have not watched!)

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sinloi June 21 2010, 16:11:17 UTC
There are not words to describe how much I love this. I mean, honestly, I could probably re-read this over and over and over again.

Just one little thing; it's Juan Tabo blvd. not Wantabo. I only know 'cause of closed captions. :) In any case, this is getting mem'ed.

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fakepoptart June 21 2010, 17:42:07 UTC
Ahh omg thank you. XD I had a feeling I was spelling it wrong but I could only think of the way it sounded... hehe
thanks for reading too. :D

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vegarin June 22 2010, 02:00:14 UTC
That was gut-wrenchingly beautiful. I especially loved the imagery of Jesse spinning in the chair - I could picture it with crystal (no pun intended) clarity.

Thanks for writing and sharing them with us, and yes, I agree it is rather painful that we have such a few BB stories around. Well, at least now you are going around to rectify the situation for us. I really appreciate it. ;)

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fakepoptart June 22 2010, 03:32:30 UTC
<3 thank you!
I'm a big fan of that image myself. lol I pictured it as soon as Walt picks the raisin off the ground in "Fly". Then after the end of "Half Measures" I had to write it. haha

Yes I know. I normally have such a hang-up with letting people read things I've written but some more BB fan ficton had to make it onto the internet. :P

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sydpenguinbunny October 9 2011, 12:22:21 UTC
Beautiful <3 This describes so perfectly what Jesse must have been feeling in 313... My heart still just breaks for him, for what he had to do and what he lost because of it :(

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