"Guilty Conscience"

[fakepoptart]

Dated: Yesterday

Title: Guilty Conscience

Rating: Meh, T. Minor language, reference to violence

Summary: Jesse is guilty of a lot of things... but he could have gotten away with it if he'd wanted to. OC POV

[[ Very future-ficcy. I'm not decided on the current situation here except that it's a while after the S3 finale (which means spoilerz) so Jesse

Comments

[readishmael]

Oh, man, the thought of Jesse in prison is very, very upsetting.

This is fantastic. I think having the outside voice realy worked in your favor, because the whole thing feels more fluid and polished and whole than some of the others. And although the events are farther outside the realm of the actual show than the other stories, it's all still totally believable. Right amount of guilt, right amount of sense of duty, and Jesse would totally do this...and he'd totally be able to back the cop into a corner like that, without ever actually convincing him. Nice work.

[fakepoptart]

I told you using original characters is good for me. lol Even if they're simple and brief. ;D
And thanks for the props. <3 I really liked the feel of this one but I wasn't sure how it would work in contrast to the "canon" or whatever you call it. I thought it seemed like something that could actually happen... heh.

Jesse in prison is frightening, yes. Someone mentioned something before about maybe making a season of BB where they're in prison, but I was thinking for Jesse that would be just... No. o_O

[sinloi]

I'm really glad I checked out your journal, because I was so sure you couldn't have posted anything yet, and I almost didn't. Would you mind if I friended you so I could get updated on when you post?

Anyway, this might be my favorite of all the things you've written. It's appropriately depressing, and so convincingly Jesse that I reread it about four or five times before commenting. It's pretty sad, the thought of Jesse in jail. He'd be like Ed Norton in American History X. And if you've never seen that, I mean he'd probably get raped. A lot. :(

PS. WRITE MOAR PLZ

[fakepoptart]

Haha yeah I didn't think I'd update for awhile but I got an idea-bitch-slap. Go ahead and friend me. :D 'cause I can never tell when I'm gonna post something.

I have seen that movie. Oh god, poor Jesse. XP
Thanks for reading again. 8D I'll try to write more whenever I get the urge. Feel free to slide me a prompt or two if you got one... hahah.

[ddmoca]

your just the coolest thank you for doing this for all the deprived fans out there.

(the idea of Jesse in prison is really,really good ,take it in consideration and put it through that great mind of yours)

[fakepoptart]

Well I am quite deprived myself. 8D

Jesse in prison could be interesting but I don't know if I'm brave enough to write it. xD

[mswyrr]

This is freaking brilliant. The dialogue is perfect, Jesse is so very in character, and it's gorgeous to see his and Walt's relationship from the POV of the cop. He's got it all wrong, but there's a lot of truth to it, too, just told from a slantwise angle.

[fakepoptart]

thank you! :) I hadn't re-read this one in awhile - your comment reminded me. Heh. I quite like this one myself, now that I look at it again! Maybe I'll post it to my FF.net account.
Anyway, thanks a lot for the comments, so glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

[sydpenguinbunny]

Jesse :( This was totally believable; especially considering the conversation at the end of Season 3, I can definitely see Jesse just deciding he's better off taking the fall for all of it than having to basically live his life looking over his shoulder (not to mention that it's ever-increasing). *hugs Jesse* And I think he really would do anything for Walt :(