Oh, awesome! Thank you for this, because it was brilliant: twisted and so, so hot, and totally in keeping with the canon and with the fic series as it exists so far. ("Make me" made my brain leak out of my ears. So hot.)
Ahhh thank you! And I'm serious when I say you should take partial blame for the fact that this turned into something of a series. >:p But it is really helpful when I want to write something sexy!
I think I actually had a nightmare last night where I was getting crucified over this fic so yeah, your feedback is still highly valued over here. XD
Jesus, I didn't even know this existed!! I mean, well, I saw another chapter on ff.net, but for some reason the title 'ad absurdum' threw me for a loop; I though it was an authors note. I do not know why, but I am glad my dumbass clicked it, 'cause OMG Porn! It was a very nice little surprise.
And, aw dedicated in part to lil ol' me? I feel even stupider for not noticing this before. In any case, the sex is hot, the angst is palpable, and the dialog is... also pretty hot, and perfectly in character, but I expect nothing less when reading your work. :)
Oh and the nature of the sex? Up against a wall? In an alley? With anger fueling it? Oh dear, fucking lord, but they may be picking up the pile of mush that was me for weeks to come.
And, I may, or may not be working on a fanart for your fic. Not gonna say which, because if I never finish it I'll just feel like an a-hole for teasing you so.Also, since this is a monster of a comment already, I may as well add that I loved the tiny little piece with Saul. I literally laughed out loud
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Holy toast, you couldn't have picked a better day to comment. I was in one of my rare epic-bad-moods but this so totally cheered my morose ass right the fuck up. ^_^
I'll secretly be excited about that. Like super secret, you won't even know. -nudge-
And the thing with Saul was like, half of the reason I wrote this. lol
"Yeah, yeah, you know, I could see your ego from space right now.
Ahahahahaha! YEAH he can.
As readishmael noted, the "Make me" bit was seriously hot. And I love that that's the thing that especially turns Walt's gears as well. I think there's some serious truth in that, in terms of what it is about Jesse that would attract him sexually--his youthful and often fiery defiance. And I also like the implication that Jesse is aware that this gets Walt going, and that he knows how to use it.
A/N: One day these two will sleep together in a way that's not seedy and exploitive.I would love to see you do this, actually. I continue to linger over the parts in "Paroxysm" where Walt's playing with Jesse's hair, being affectionate--as I said earlier, I really did believe that part and could picture it easily, especially where he rubs Jesse's shoulder through the blanket and is fumbling his words about wanting to stay with him all day. It's unusually sweet but somehow terribly plausible in that moment (I also like your use of the word "overcome" to describe
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"Yeah, yeah, you know, I could see your ego from space right now."
I serious love that line. That and "Holy fuck, dude, don't flatter yourself" both still make me grin whenever I think of them. So perfectly Jesse, so perfectly hilarious. And it introduces a playful quality to this new part of their relationship, in spite of all the anger fueling Jesse, that bodes well for something sweeter somewhere down the line, which I too would really love to see (not that I wouldn't also welcome more outright smut).
"I think there's some serious truth in that, in terms of what it is about Jesse that would attract him sexually--his youthful and often fiery defiance."
I agree, and I'd like to add that there's also truth in the way that Walt kind of hates that he does find that quality in Jesse attractive.
Mwahaha thanks for the comments both of you. Something sweeter may happen down the line now that I know I wouldn't be the only one who was into it.
Unfortunately I watched an interview the other day from Bryan Cranston after the Emmys where he says Aaron is like a son to him and I was just like, "._. how am I supposed to slash your characters together now??" So at the moment I'm totally knocked off my stride. lol Recovery, bless my perverted psyche, seems inevitable at least.
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and yeah no problem. lol
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And I'm serious when I say you should take partial blame for the fact that this turned into something of a series. >:p
But it is really helpful when I want to write something sexy!
I think I actually had a nightmare last night where I was getting crucified over this fic so yeah, your feedback is still highly valued over here. XD
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This!!!
See, we agree. ;)
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And, aw dedicated in part to lil ol' me? I feel even stupider for not noticing this before. In any case, the sex is hot, the angst is palpable, and the dialog is... also pretty hot, and perfectly in character, but I expect nothing less when reading your work. :)
Oh and the nature of the sex? Up against a wall? In an alley? With anger fueling it? Oh dear, fucking lord, but they may be picking up the pile of mush that was me for weeks to come.
And, I may, or may not be working on a fanart for your fic. Not gonna say which, because if I never finish it I'll just feel like an a-hole for teasing you so.Also, since this is a monster of a comment already, I may as well add that I loved the tiny little piece with Saul. I literally laughed out loud ( ... )
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I'll secretly be excited about that. Like super secret, you won't even know. -nudge-
And the thing with Saul was like, half of the reason I wrote this. lol
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Ahahahahaha! YEAH he can.
As readishmael noted, the "Make me" bit was seriously hot. And I love that that's the thing that especially turns Walt's gears as well. I think there's some serious truth in that, in terms of what it is about Jesse that would attract him sexually--his youthful and often fiery defiance. And I also like the implication that Jesse is aware that this gets Walt going, and that he knows how to use it.
A/N: One day these two will sleep together in a way that's not seedy and exploitive.I would love to see you do this, actually. I continue to linger over the parts in "Paroxysm" where Walt's playing with Jesse's hair, being affectionate--as I said earlier, I really did believe that part and could picture it easily, especially where he rubs Jesse's shoulder through the blanket and is fumbling his words about wanting to stay with him all day. It's unusually sweet but somehow terribly plausible in that moment (I also like your use of the word "overcome" to describe ( ... )
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I serious love that line. That and "Holy fuck, dude, don't flatter yourself" both still make me grin whenever I think of them. So perfectly Jesse, so perfectly hilarious. And it introduces a playful quality to this new part of their relationship, in spite of all the anger fueling Jesse, that bodes well for something sweeter somewhere down the line, which I too would really love to see (not that I wouldn't also welcome more outright smut).
"I think there's some serious truth in that, in terms of what it is about Jesse that would attract him sexually--his youthful and often fiery defiance."
I agree, and I'd like to add that there's also truth in the way that Walt kind of hates that he does find that quality in Jesse attractive.
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Unfortunately I watched an interview the other day from Bryan Cranston after the Emmys where he says Aaron is like a son to him and I was just like, "._. how am I supposed to slash your characters together now??" So at the moment I'm totally knocked off my stride. lol Recovery, bless my perverted psyche, seems inevitable at least.
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