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falafel_fiction

The Paradox

Jan 13, 2008 21:43

The Paradox

Summary: Charlie chases a Scottish man through the rainy streets of London, which leads him to a fateful meeting in an antique shop. Written for the
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time travel, charlielives!

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falafel_fiction January 14 2008, 21:52:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm so pleased you think I nailed Charlie. I think since Desmond's time-travel/future seeing episode I've been more interested in the sci-fi side of the show. So pleased the concept came across for you!

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falafel_fiction January 14 2008, 22:18:00 UTC

Well, I've made so many psychic premonitions about Charlies possible resurrection in fanfic. It'd be pleasing if one of them turned out to be right!

Ooh! You're writing a Hawking fic? Squeee!

cylune9 January 15 2008, 00:20:01 UTC

Awesome fic! Thank you so much for the dedication. I'm glad that little theory is picking up speed and it's because of you. ;)

Loved the dialogue between Mrs. Hawkins and Charlie and I love the last line... so full of meaning.

Glad you were inspired to come out of retirement!

falafel_fiction January 15 2008, 11:08:38 UTC

Thanks lune!

You came up with this theory months ago and I can't believe it's only just catching on. I don't think the penny dropped for me until I started reading Dark Tower. We're getting a lot of converts!

jemmalynette January 15 2008, 16:48:08 UTC

Wow, that was amazing! Gave me chills! What an interesting theory! I thought this was wonderfully written. I really liked Mrs Hawkings in this too, she was very mysterious but forward. I loved Charlie's reaction also. Great fic!

falafel_fiction January 15 2008, 22:25:35 UTC

Thank you, Jemmz! I glad the theory came across and was successfully chilling. Great icon, btw. Very fitting!

liamsbrother January 19 2008, 03:12:51 UTC

*blinks* Personally, I'm of the R.A.Heinlein school when it comes to paradoxes, but this is a marvelously tricky idea! You've got a great feel for Mrs. Hawking.
It felt as though the woman had just appeared out of the thin air.
She does give that feeling, doesn't she?

falafel_fiction January 19 2008, 11:43:16 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I managed to sell the tricky paradox theory. Mrs Hawkings is really fun to write.

Congratz on your coming out of lurkerdom! It's always great to see an interesting new writer on LJ, especially if they are a Charlie fan too!