Fan Fiction: Charades - Part Uno

[falafhel]

Title: Charades (1/6?).
Author: falafhel
Rating: Pg-17, to be, you know, sure.
Fandom: Football rps (au).
Warnings: It’s a bit angsty, maybe? And the word fuck is tossed around a few times...
Pairing(s): Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos, mention of Iker Casillas and Cesc Fábregas (because I just love them too damn much), as well as Navas and Piqué.
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Comments

[kissmecait17]

Oh. Ohhhhhh.
Poor Sergio. :(

I like this and I definitely want to see where it goes. I am kind of glad that Sergio was angry with Fernando and let him know it. I love, love, love the beginning with the example of how they have to call each other when shopping. It's sweet.

“I know you say that, but I just need to call Sergio and check”
Perfect.

[falafhel]

I know! Nando is being a bit of a twat at the moment, isn't he? Silly, silly boy!

Eeep, I'm glad you liked it. I'm totally nervous about it. I can just imagine it going somewhat astray even though everything is planned out!

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[go_for_it_kid]

Nando is in trouble, and he deserves to be! rude, how dare he not call poor baby Sergio? doesn't he know that he is very sensitive?
I hope Sergio makes him suffer...
ohhhhhh this is gonna be good, get on it girl you have 5 more chapters to go! lol, just kidding... take you time :D

[falafhel]

Serge is sensitive indeed! And Nando really should know better then to not return his calls! No manners that boy! ;D

Ooooh! You are making me slightly scared! i feels as though I have a lot to live up to now! BUT pressure is always good! :D

Also, super happy you liked it! And i'm currently working on the 2nd chapter as we speak (well, obviously not this second)!

[go_for_it_kid]

Yay!!! I'm glad you are working on it :) I'm kind of a picky compulsive reader lol... This chapter was wonderful I'm pretty sure you have more than enough talent to live up to my expectations!

[falafhel]

Nervous now! I shall try my best to keep your interest!
And hopefully, the next chapter will be up tonight sometime, if I don't get really rally unfocused after the Real Madrid vs Sevilla match. Too many hot men run in shorts has a tendency to just overload my brain for a couple of hour. Lol
BUT it is almost finish, I think, so fingers crossed!

[cricket213]

Silly Nando. Of COURSE your Sese knows.

I feel so awful for Sergio!!

Sorry for the crap comment. I really liked this and can't wait for more! :)

[falafhel]

Yeah, Fer is being a shite friend at the moment. *sigh* Poor, poor Serge!

You made me happy, so obviously, your comment was not crap! : D