Comments | fall_underwater: Fic: Jeff Winger and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Birthday (Part 1 of 2)

fall_underwater

Fic: Jeff Winger and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Birthday (Part 1 of 2)

Jun 16, 2010 01:42

Title: Jeff Winger and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Birthday (Part 1 of 2)
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG? There's a couple of bad words
Words: 4091
Spoilers: None
Notes: Lots of dialogue. Like, a lot of dialogue. Don't know where it all came from. Hopefully it's at least decent dialogue.

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Comments 70

lilyayl June 16 2010, 06:15:26 UTC

You? Are EVIL.

fall_underwater June 17 2010, 00:40:16 UTC

Sort of, yeah.

:) Thanks for reading!

redbrunja August 10 2010, 06:33:44 UTC

Seconded.

Also, I love how happy and yet Jeff-like Jeff is in this. You did a fantastic job.

I adored the section when they're talking about Annie moving in.

Any idea when the next chapter will be uploaded?

ashiabug26 June 16 2010, 06:25:10 UTC

So I was loving the story and I was going to be all like yay for a Doctor Who reference and then I get to the end and all I can say is "Oh Shit!" Still I love the story and Annie taking the picture of him kissing her cheek so cute.Can't wait for the 2nd part.

fall_underwater June 17 2010, 00:40:56 UTC

Thanks!

Second part should hopefully be up within a reasonable amount of time.

madeelly June 16 2010, 06:32:39 UTC

I love this fic! The dialogue is so perfectly in character and fits the tone of the show so well. BUT THAT CLIFFHANGER. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO MEEEE. Just kidding - amazing fic! =D

0penhearts June 16 2010, 06:35:41 UTC

You. Icon. Is. AWESOME.

madeelly June 16 2010, 07:13:43 UTC

Heee! Thank you! It's by the lovely grosserpepper.

fall_underwater June 17 2010, 00:41:31 UTC

Thank you!

Ha, sorry 'bout the cliffhanger

AHHHHHHH! 0penhearts June 16 2010, 06:34:58 UTC

DIALOGUE! THE DIALOGUE, it is AWESOME!

Like, PONIES! And "I love how logical you try to be in your insanity."! And HAIKUS! And a HERD OF PONIES ("What would we do with a herd of ponies? That's ridiculous." "That's ridiculous? What would we even do with one?")

I laughed (noisily) outloud SEVERAL times, which is actually a bad thing, because my husband is trying to sleep. BUT, pretty much worth it :)

Re: AHHHHHHH! fall_underwater June 17 2010, 00:43:05 UTC

Yay, you liked the dialogue! I was kind of terrified that there might be too much or that it was too random. Because, well, ponies are random.

Haha, hope that hubby managed to get some sleep in spite of the laughter!

daughterofcarol June 16 2010, 06:50:24 UTC

This fic had me smiling and happy until the end. Damn you evil person!!

fall_underwater June 17 2010, 00:44:02 UTC

Lol, thanks for reading :)

Sorry for my evilness!

daughterofcarol June 17 2010, 03:30:27 UTC

I'll forgive you once you post the second part.