And I Will Raise a City of Bones and Blood [1/? :: WIP]
My muse loves me right now; thus, I love it back. I also love our new modem - FINALLY, uninterrupted internet! I've been fighting it for weeks.
NOTE; THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS. THIS MEANS I AM REQUESTING CRITIQUE. YEAH, YOU HEARD ME. *steels self*
I'm not exactly sure what to think of this - the idea nagged and nagged and nagged until I HAD to write ( Read more... )
NOTE; THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS. THIS MEANS I AM REQUESTING CRITIQUE. YEAH, YOU HEARD ME. *steels self*
I'm not exactly sure what to think of this - the idea nagged and nagged and nagged until I HAD to write ( Read more... )
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Oh jeez, this is gorgeous writing. Critique cannot even be given by me because it's so phenomenal.
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Despite the fact that critique can always be given, you still made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside especially 'cause no one had commented and I was like, B'aww, okay, dropping.
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Awwww. D:
Maybe no one saw it. Because this is just too awesome. <3
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Except, like, Soviet era. 'Cause otherwise it wouldn't work?
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Pleaseee continuee
Like Dannie said, critique cannot even be given.
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I shall, I shall!
Yesssss it can. >o>;
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You also have someone else who likes it, but she just doesn't have an lj so yeah
JUST SO YOU KNOW xD
AHPPFT
EXCS ME WTF R U TLKN BOUT
THIS WAS AMAZING
I am jealous of your writing.
I especially liked your word choice.
For example,
"The last of China's sanity bled at the thought"
I think it's really awesome how you incorporated the fact that he was losing his mind, and the imagery of bleeding in the same sentence.
/AP Language student-ness
LOL
Omg
I don't even know what's wrong with me today. Honestly, I'm usually not this weird xD Actually, Dannie could probably testify that I am. BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT >.>
/Extremely long comment that consisted mostly of rambling
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Thank you so much for all of your encouraging words! ♥
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