Everlastingly (One-shot Fanfiction)

[fallingpetals6]

Everlastingly

Jaejoong is dying.
They say he has a few months.

But Jaejoong feels it, through his whole body, the most he could have is weeks.

The weak feeling. The nausea. The struggle for every breath.

He is as good as dead.

Yunho can’t believe that Jaejoong would be able to die. The man is beautiful and pure, made of the whitest clouds and the

Comments

[mimz_song]

This was beautiful T_T *weeps* So sad...yet happy ^+^ loved it!!

[fallingpetals6]

hehe, mimz is first again ^-^

thank you very much~! I'm so very glad you love it! <3 and thank you for saying it was beautiful ^-^

[keigomilk]

i like the story line...
but i think its a bit too abrupt .....

good job though ~~~ =D

[fallingpetals6]

thank you for reading~! ^-^
yeah, i think i know what you mean, Jaejoongie died too quickly right? :) oh well :D haha, I'll do better next time ^-^

[samui_sakura]

awww~~~~~~
*sniffle*

why do we always kill jj???
*hugs yunnie*

it's good bebe!!! ^^v
don't fret much...

[fallingpetals6]

*tissue for your sniffle*
thank youuu~! <3
ahh, your right, not just us, everyone kills Jaejoongie :((
I guess cause we all love him so much <3
thank you so much for reading~! <3 <3

I fret cause I fail at death!fics. Yours was so goood <3 I love your fics~!

I think I should stick to happy or angst :D I don't fail completely that way :D

[tvxqjaeoppa]

uwah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs away sobbing* my Joongie is dead, betty's Yunnie is dead! >.<

but...... on the other hand, at least they're together 4ever... ^_^ << silver lining! ^_^

[fallingpetals6]

*sniffle* wah, i killed everyone's love DX kathy sorry :((
haha, always a silver lining ^-^