Raise Me Up (Yoosu fanfiction)

[fallingpetals6]

Okies, so here's my first Yoosu fanfiction. please comment, but be gentle!

Disclaimer: I don't own Yoochun or Junsu :( sadly
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Raise Me Up (Yoosu) He hated when Yoochun got like that. Yoochun was usually romantic and funny and mischievous. But he had his days, like everyone did, where the sky fell in and everything seemed

Comments

[tvxqlover84]

For being the first one it isn't as bad as you might think it is.
And yes, you are right... Yoochun is the best liar there is. XD
The title fit perfectly with the plot.

When typing give some space to sentences, after that I think everything else was pretty good.

One more thing Kathy, when posting on hug remember to put a lits of your tags not only, paring: yoochun/junsu, so it would be easier if anyone else would like to read this fic they can find it in other categories.

[fallingpetals6]

lol, thank you, I don't really know how to use all the buttons yet ^-^

[keigomilk]

this was actually pretty good ~~~ ^_____^

[fallingpetals6]

<3 thank you! :)

[mimz_song]

LOVED IT!! why are you scared from the comments this is AWESOME ^_^
huhu i love angst nyahahah you otha see how many angst i got on my lj lol people have told me they cried LOL *shrugs*
I'm a sucker for angst ^_^ haha ^^ and i loved this one ^_^
Write more ^^

[fallingpetals6]

yay! Thank you very much! ^-^ I'm happy that everyone seems to like it so far!

[junsu_luvr]

Lol. Much better than my first Yoosu, I'll tell you that much! ^^
But but. Yoochun! DDD8 Nooo~ don't leave your Susu!
I love how Junsu tries to comfort him. “I’m not grown up yet. See, I’m shorter than you. Will you stay for me?” I loved that line. ;~;
Now I feel like reading an angst. O.o Lol

[fallingpetals6]

Thank youu! I know, Yoochun seems sad to me sometimes :) and I thought Junsu needed some of his usual adorable-ness, so I put that line. I'm very glad you liked it ^-^ lol

[tvxqjaeoppa]

i love it Kathy! u should put up the 1 u gave 2 me in school.... the 5 siblings 1....
don't worry about the flames! ur works r always really good! ^_^
wish me luck on my JaeMin fic! ^_^ ^_~

Vy

[fallingpetals6]

good luck with ur fic Vy! :) I'm sure it'll be awesome! I wanna read it first! :)

okay, if I get a chance, I guess I'll post it. :)

[tvxqjaeoppa]

yeah thx. frankly urs is a thousand times better than mine will ever be.... >.< oh well, on with the rest of the random TVXQ one-shots! ^_^ one of them has to be good enough to post online.... >_> i hope.... T_T

at least school's over... i don't have to worry about that! ^_^

[fallingpetals6]

Vyy, you should post it. I really wanna read it, I bet it's good! I wanna read your Prince of Tennis fic :) <3