Smile.

Feb 06, 2009 08:45



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liljaejae February 6 2009, 02:21:05 UTC
oooh i like the part about crooked teeth lol :D
the rest is really really nice. your writing is really good bb ♥♥
your last 2 paragraphs keeled my heart ♥
andddddd zomg holding back the tears is my favorite song!! ♥

leader-sshi is hottt (hhaha i love him most in rising sun too!) and yah i wish he will stop being TOO responsible and force himself TOO much. poor leader ♥♥

soooo yeah i love this a LOT! write more dearrr
and more hearts for you :D ♥♥♥♥♥

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fallofdark February 8 2009, 15:23:16 UTC
Your comment made me smile. :)
Thanks for reading bb and for the many hearts ♥

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liljaejae February 8 2009, 16:40:28 UTC
your writing makes ME smile :)))
and bb where are youuuuuu?? i don't see you online anywhereeeeee

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fallofdark February 9 2009, 05:15:23 UTC
You're too sweet ♥

My MSN is whacky and disconnects me periodically, so I didn't bother logging in. Sorry...? :(

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uknow_jaeho February 6 2009, 03:49:09 UTC
spotted* XD

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ja3h0lurva February 6 2009, 07:31:01 UTC
Darn! I am not first! Although you told me that you gonna post it up soon. Imma slow >__>

Anyway! YAY for Yunnie's birthday!! <3 <3

Too bad I cannot read this now.. because I am rushing for my class now =X
Will definitely looking forward to reading this later tonight <3

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fallofdark February 8 2009, 15:24:47 UTC
I knowww. I was waiting for you!
Tsk tsk. Slow poke. :x

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ja3h0lurva February 9 2009, 16:15:16 UTC
Sorry.. I was really busy!! Had 2 assignments to hand up.. I pulled an all-nighter and finally got it done.. Whew!!

Gonna go read your ficcie nowwww~ :D :D

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ja3h0lurva February 9 2009, 16:23:39 UTC
This is- Omg. Oh my god. Oh. My. God.
YUUUUNHOOOOO <3 <3 <3

I love EVERYTHING!
The general start and all the good things of a simple smile- you wrote it really well. I just smiled reading it!
THEN you narrowed it down to Yunho's and talk about his and gahhh everything is SPOT ON. Its all that I love and adore about my beloved Leadersshi and you portrayed it SO WELL! <3
He has such an amazing character and I agree that we love him everytime he shows us those sides of him.
"His smile makes us appreciate his emotions; the myriad of facial expressions and feelings he displays, and sometimes even those he tries to conceal." -- this is my FAVOURITE LINE and god it just left a PANG in my heart <3

Oh Krissy~ I love you so much for having written this! Please write more about Yunho or just any member in general (and write a jaeho :P) because darn I WANT MORE FROM YOU! <3 <3

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cheesy_mousy February 6 2009, 12:49:21 UTC
niiiice! =D even if i dunno the guy.. i really like it. your words and descriptions of a 'smile' is very meeaningful. again, you took something normal and spun such beautiful words for it.

you really have a knack for this kinda things. keep it up and continue writing!

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fallofdark February 8 2009, 15:48:57 UTC
He's the band-leader of my current obsession. You gotta keep up with the times! xD;
Regardless, thank you for reading. It meant a lot to me ♥

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cheesy_mousy February 9 2009, 06:40:25 UTC
oh right your dbsk lol XD XD

it doesnt matter about what, as long as you wrote. then i will read. you seldom have time to write much anwways. sad D=

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julesluvesdbsk February 8 2009, 02:16:16 UTC
omggggg ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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julesluvesdbsk February 8 2009, 02:57:59 UTC
yunho yunho yunho yunho yunho yunho ♥

ahhh i love this! my favourite part is you wrote it all in general and later, you wrote how yunho's is 'ifferent, but significant all the same'. that really made me smile :))
all of the words after that is just so much <3 that i don't know what else to say rly.

i can't put down in words just how much i love this fic buttt thanks for writing this and imma gonna tackle you with squishes and huggles and raburabu when you get online ♥♥

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fallofdark February 8 2009, 15:27:23 UTC
I'm happy you like it this much! That alone is enough to make me satisfied with a big silly grin on my face. :)
Oh I look forward to your squishes, huggles and raburabu ♥

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julesluvesdbsk February 8 2009, 15:54:04 UTC
you should not be surprised! it really is a nice and pleasant read. you always move my heart with your writing :D

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