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[fallsinautumn]

My heart divuldges,
Lingering in a kiss,
Slipping from your lips,
Underneath a mask of stars,
Laying quiet; undiscovered.

Comments

I love the story and the poem!

[anonymous]

I read the poem in the car..i loved it! was smiling the entire way home =D

The story I read when i got up into my room... all i can say is ... it brought about alot more smiles. It was very interesting to see what was going on from your point of veiw,and that you have some skill as a writer =D i enjoyed every word. Ill write one from my point of veiw tommorow before work =D

I <3 you!
PS: I dont look like a george =P heheh JK
-Gunter

Re: I love the story and the poem!

[fallsinautumn]

Thanx baby, I'm so glad you liked it. It's really important that people like my writing so 10 points for me!

[c311o_boy]

like it i like it

[halohesh]

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!! ZANDER!! ::runs:: lol, probably hasn't a damn clue who i am either...

[fallsinautumn]

fruitcake!!

[c311o_boy]

who are you..?

[c311o_boy]

like it...

[universescenter]

*gives a megan look* thats what you have earned from such beautiful and powerful words. ill see you at 2:45!
love
meggy

hee hee

[fallsinautumn]

kisses*

Re: hee hee

[halohesh]

::opens eyes::gasps:: OMG!! LINDSEY! WHAT WILL GUNTER THINK!?!?!? ::scrubs lips clean:: lol

I <3 Lin

[puertodelceilo]

I love you!

You should come over some time.

See how my room owns yours.

See my pretty Chris Chelios icon. Sarah made that for me.

Re: I <3 Lin

[fallsinautumn]

Indeed i do see your icon and it is SEXY! lol
COME WHAT MAY!