Normally don't go for AU fic, but this is utterly amazing. Everything was so spot on and the dialogue was superb. This was my favorite line- "When they fuck (and when they do, it always plays out like a moment of weakness, like one of them has broken and apologies will need to made), she likes to press a wet open mouth to that scar, if only because it makes him grab her that much tighter, make a sound like if he could, he’d maybe cry."
This was so good! I love the way you were able to keep Peggy, Stan and Ginsberg's characterizations in a different environment and place, and it was really well-written too.
This is the best fic that's happened to me. All their voices are perfect, this is probably the most accurate I've seen in an AU, but I especially love how you've written Ginsberg.
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Normally don't go for AU fic, but this is utterly amazing. Everything was so spot on and the dialogue was superb.
This was my favorite line- "When they fuck (and when they do, it always plays out like a moment of weakness, like one of them has broken and apologies will need to made), she likes to press a wet open mouth to that scar, if only because it makes him grab her that much tighter, make a sound like if he could, he’d maybe cry."
GAARH so friggin awesome-sauce
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