With Snapshots of Summers
[We're not broken, just bent (and we can learn to love again)]
1When she was eighteen and giggly and spontaneous and spent every summer morning baked under the unforgiving sun, Choi Sooyoung found her true love ( Read more... )
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OMGOSH MY HEART
JUST
CANMSNDMASD
CANNOT
FATHOM
THIS
KASJDKLSADJKSADJ WHAT THE FCK OMG
everything about this fic is flawless ;_; from tiffany to hyoyeon (i can so imagine them being like this) the scene where tiffany threw the full cup lol that was epic
"It was always Tiffany who stalked all of their other friends for single brothers, cousins, workmates, neighbors, gym instructors, cab drivers, bellmen to force Sooyoung to date" omg precious tiffany i can really imagine this
to the fcking yoonhae omg the yoonhae totally BROKE MY HEART #NOTOK
One day, her brain will forget everything, including you. But her heart will always remember everything about you.
omg this quote though it reminds me of a movie which i forgot the title, where both the man and woman did something to their memories (to forget about each other) but eventually they fell in love with one another again because while they don't remember any memories of their happy times, their hearts do and omgosh /flailing ( ... )
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I enjoyed writing the soccer scene most as well! (Because who wouldn't want hot, sweaty guys with chiseled bodies to promise you the sweetest things???)
AND SO NERVOUS ABOUT THE YOONHAE!!! I DON'T THE FRICKEST IDEA HOW THEY ARE AS AN OTP!!! Glad that's over! (:
Glad you think this is coherent! (Honestly took me a year to complete. If that's not sad, I don't know what is lol) Anyway, Merry Christmas! Have a good holiday!
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the soccer scene is just so cute sighs and man yoonhae i miss them and i think you portrayed them well!!!!!!! so don't worry about it! (just that it's so darn sad ugh why must yoona have dementia WHY)
Merry Christmas to you too! I'm so glad you finished this masterpiece in the end hehe
p/s: i'm kimmy, i think we've talked to each other before but not so much but i don't really remember but man idk i'm so lame BUT here's an official HI!! :D
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Re: p/s: Heeeeey Kimmy! I've heard some about you from Bam (because I feel she knows everyone around here lol) (:
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OK START!
"He was tall and handsome and every bit the cliché of the guy all the bad girls want. He had a boyish grin permanently painted on his face, and he looked as if he knew that he was heaven-sent. Even upside-down from where Sooyoung looked and with the rays of the sun glaring angrily behind him, he was… perfect."
---omg sino toooo? ahahahahahahaha pamysteryoso pa leche haha
When she was twenty-five and still giggly and spontaneous and coveted the days when she can soak in the mid-morning sun without worrying about cancer, Choi ( ... )
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“You could have just asked me. Not bribe me with two hundred and eighty dollars worth of clothes that I’ll wear only once.”
“And be rejected?” she scoffed, “No.”
He stayed silent for a moment. “Were you sick of going alone or of seeing him not alone?”
---omg... omg... OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG LKSANFKAFNLKSAFNMALKF HINDI SI KYU ANG MYSTERY BOY?! OMGOD LKANFKANFKANFAKNFA
HORRIESHIET ASNFKANFAK COULD IT BE...? WAAAAAAAAAAA KANSFKNFLKSANFLKSNFLKAMF TEKA GRABE INULIT KO BASAHIN MULA SA PART NA BUMILI NG DAMIT SI SYOO HANGGANG DUN SA NABUHUSAN NG BEER SI KYU. LKAMKALNMFAL
"He sat on the steps of the Chois’ front porch, dressed in a lavender pinstripe shirt and dark (freshly-washed and ironed) jeans."
"Cho Kyuhyun’s pastel yellow shirt."
---omfg ksanmflkafnmlksamf HINDI SO KYU ANG MYSTERY GUY OMGH AKJNFAKSFNSAKJFNSAFKSANFAKNFAKSFNAKFNAKNFAKJ
“Here,” she said, presenting her tarts with outstretched hands, “I made strawberry tarts ( ... )
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“Choi Sooyoung!” he suddenly shouted, tucking the ball under the crook of one elbow and shielding his eyes from the sun as he tried to locate her.
Surprised, Sooyoung sat straighter against the tree and pushed her sunglasses over her hair. Her heart dislodged itself from her throat and slowly sank back to where it should be inside her ribcage. She gave him a small, embarrassed wave. She felt the heated stares from the bleachers, and some of the players in the field turned towards her direction.
The goalkeeper smiled. He propped the ball on the ground, took a few steps backwards and then suddenly charged forward, giving the ball a hearty kick that made it fly well over midfield.
The clock stopped. The gamekeeper blew his whistle.
“I will marry you someday!”
The skins won the game, 0:1. Their goalkeeper won a fluttering piece of Choi Sooyoung’s heart.
---oh my putangina ugh neye whyyyy SHET. TEKA. IF MY MEMORY DOES NOT FAIL ME, PARANG NABANGGIT MO NA SAKIN TONG LINYA NA TO OHMY UGGGGH KSAJNBDKSANFKA
He had a pink-on-white polka- ( ... )
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---PUTA PLS MAKE THIS STOP :((((
On the plate of pancakes: This is your favorite breakfast. You don’t hate anything on this plate.
On the glass of orange juice: You hate orange juice. We ran out of milk.
On top of a few prescription bottles: These are your superhero pills.
On the handle of his fork: You are blind. Put on your contacts. They’re in the bathroom.
On the first door the left: I am the bathroom.
---how is it possible to laugh and sob at the same time while i read this. the sound that came out of me is hahahahuhuhuhu
He noticed a final sticky note attached to a vase of white daisies at the center of the table: The girl in your room made you breakfast. Her name is Sooyoung. She’s your wife.
But, by then, he already knew that.---HUWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA i am ( ... )
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this is a freaking masterpiece
admittedly i was a bit confused at first but on second read, everything makes total sense and aaaah take my tears ;_;
i don't know how you write so well, how everything pieces together, the exact recipe for heartbreak and bittersweet love...
i especially liked your little insertion of yoonhae bc no one has written them in ages ♥
i don't know if i'll ever get over this fic :o good job!
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Thanks for giving love! Merry Christmas! You have a good holiday, kapeesh? (:
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Sooyoung breathed out an easy laugh. “I won’t be seeing you guys as often if I fall in love again,” she teased.
Almost immediately, Changmin replied, “Not if you fall in love with me.”
i kind of guessed who the guy is but this part just stamped it for me. ugghhhhhh i love good amnesia stories (and we are surrounded by cliche ones) and this part just made me go askchsdkjfh ;___; yoonhae stole the spotlight tbh because “Then… then do you think my husband will like it?” just killed me (and all other readers too i'm sure)
thanks for writing this!
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Merry Christmas, hunny! Have a good holiday! :">
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At first when I read it I didn't know what to expect, exactly, knowing you it's bound to be angst-y. And at first I also thought her true love would be, Siwon (but later revealed he's been with Tiff so) and then Kyuhyun because guy best friend, and then this happened:
Sooyoung breathed out an easy laugh. “I won’t be seeing you guys as often if I fall in love again,” she teased.
Almost immediately, Changmin replied, “Not if you fall in love with me.”
I just want to tell you that I almost almost cried at the perfection and flawlessness of this piece. I love the tidbits of Yoonhae in there, and I love that the tiny details of the present and past answering each other led to the open ended conclusion about how Sooyoung is the best thing that’s ever happened to him.
This was just so beautiful. Thank you for writing again. Thank you for sharing this. ♥
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