I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!! I am gonna just sit here and stare at LJ till 13 pops up.
this "And then he coughs so hard it brings tears to his eyes (or maybe he’s just crying) (or maybe that’s just Dean) and Dean grips his shoulders and cups his chin and holds on while his brother bleeds into his hands." Brilliance.
Meep! Sammy! There's so much blood and I just want to scoop him up, and kind of Dean as well, because I love the way you've written him.
Is it what you'd call stream-of-consciousness? Not sure. But I've heard of that before and it might be this. Anyway, I love the way panicked thoughts crop up as they are occurring to him so it's a little all over the place although somehow it doesn't read all over the place and I'm not quite sure how you do that but it's good.
And I love Dean trying to figure out what's wrong and not really knowing where to look, and he seems so out of his depth and there's the scary stuff from the laptop and just yes . This is awesome.
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I am gonna just sit here and stare at LJ till 13 pops up.
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"And then he coughs so hard it brings tears to his eyes (or maybe he’s just crying) (or maybe that’s just Dean) and Dean grips his shoulders and cups his chin and holds on while his brother bleeds into his hands."
Brilliance.
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Is it what you'd call stream-of-consciousness? Not sure. But I've heard of that before and it might be this. Anyway, I love the way panicked thoughts crop up as they are occurring to him so it's a little all over the place although somehow it doesn't read all over the place and I'm not quite sure how you do that but it's good.
And I love Dean trying to figure out what's wrong and not really knowing where to look, and he seems so out of his depth and there's the scary stuff from the laptop and just yes . This is awesome.
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