Skywalker

[familybizness]

Title: Skywalker
Summary: Sam gets hurt on a hunt.  Later, the guys watch a movie.
Rating: R for language
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for, um, the Empire Strikes Back.
Author's Note: This is different for me!  Plenty of angst and h/c as always, but Sam's just 15 here.  This is maybe the shadiest John I've ever written too.

Comments

[cindyls1969]

Oh man, I just wanna smack John around for a while...no, really, I do...and hug Sam and Dean forever.

[familybizness]

I almost included a scene of Dean and John coming to blows, like, I WANTED it, but it just wasn't working.

I LOVE your icon.

[mdlaw]

I am not a John fan, and this just proves it. m :I

[familybizness]

This is definitely the most pathetic version of John I've ever written.

[verucasalt123]

Oh, this one really did get me in the heart. But lovely, as always.

[familybizness]

Thank you! I'm a sucker for young sam :)

[quickreaver]

I looove the dynamics between the boys. And it was such a clever thing, to put the pills in that pocket, unopened...adding a tough of ambiguity. It's easy to hate John in this instance but you somehow make him fragile.

Sam's brave snark, Dean's stalwart 'eldest child' syndrome, John's ennui. It's gorgeous.

[familybizness]

That pills in the pocket thing, i swear, just popped out at the end, and i was like "oh YEAH."

This comment makes my life. TOTALLY what I was trying to do! Thank you so much.

[quickreaver]

'Tough' of ambiguity? I EVEN PROOFREAD MY POST. Oy.

[lexophilia]

Poor Sam.

[familybizness]

Yeah :( Thanks for reading!