Down Time Chapter 5b/5 & Epilogue

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Down Time  Part 5b/5 & Epilogue
An old friend of Jack’s shows up on Torchwood’s doorstep, but why is he in such bad shape?
Jack/Ianto, a little Jack/Doctor
Rated Teen (No worse than an episode of Torchwood)
Approx 12,000 words
Betaed by c_woodhaven. Any mistakes are my own
This is dedicated to c_woodhaven . She who smooths my actions and brings out the emotions I

Comments

[dragonessa24]

Awwww, nice fic. I gotta say though, for all my angst love, the Mouse bit at the end is the best part, lol! Adorable idea.

[fanbot]

Thank you. Mouse just kept showing up. I'm glad he didn't upstage anyone.

[editrx]

This was quite lovely, especially Mouse. I was intrigued and went back and read through from the beginning tonight -- I found it delightful and sad and quite, quite right. :) Thank you.

[fanbot]

Thank you for replying.

[fanbot]

Thank you, my dear. It's made all the better by your input.
I wanted to add a less "exotic" destination.

[anonymous]

Sorry - it's taken me a while to catch up with your story but I'd just like to say I loved it. Especially the Doctor's reaction to being used, and Jack being able to help. Thanks for sharing!

[fanbot]

Thank you for leaving feedback. I get discouraged when I get so little.
Hope you have a great month!

[pinkfairy727]

So I have just found this gorgeous story and I adore it. It's very well written and I absolutely love Mouse :c)

[fanbot]

Thank you for the feedback. I was rather pleased with how it came out.