Prompt #1: New Beginnings

Mar 20, 2006 19:01

Here's my entry for the first writing prompt. It's an original crime ficlet. I'll announce the next prompt later tonight.

cut for length - please read and review )

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forlorn99 March 21 2006, 14:17:49 UTC

Whoa!

And WHOA!!!

Your writing never ceases to amaze me. I'm very impressed by how caught up I was in such a short period of time, how engaging it was despite the economy of words.

I also like little touches like the idea of how you distinguish between Joseph and Joe, and the little digs at amateur forensic studies with the CSI episode guide.

Nice stuff!

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fandango77 March 21 2006, 18:47:51 UTC
thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I loved how all three stories were so different from one another.

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