Title: Now You're Four Whole Hours Behind

Dec 26, 2008 17:51

Title: Now You're Four Whole Hours Behind
Written for: docladyblade
Beta: the magnificent alias424
Rating: k
Pairing: A/R

A/N: Written for the adama_roslin Secret Santa exchange with the prompt:

After she dies, he dreams of her. And when he wakes up, it always comes as a blow when he remembers she's gone.I had at one point asked for the backup request cos I couldn't get this ( Read more... )

secret santa, babylon_whore fic, babylon_whore: one shot

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vulcanicity December 26 2008, 18:12:23 UTC
Oh. My. God. *cries*

I'm actually pretty much holding back the tears right now because I'm with my sister and parents and they'd think I'm extremely strange. Anyway....

Holy SHIT. The one thing that I wish never, ever to happen on BSG (the only other thing that I would hate as much as this is Bill dying and Laura not). I think I would prefer them both to die than one to live because I can only imagine the pain that it will cause.

And well, now, you've totally made me believe that again: one of them cannot live without the other.

He had thought nothing could be worse than watching her slip away, but this, this was so much worse.
Honest to God if this actually happens in the show, I will cry and cry for days and days. Gods. This was beautifully written but so, so sad! D:

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babylon_whore December 27 2008, 20:26:46 UTC
*passes tissue*
hee, I should totally have put a "may cause weepies" on this.

Thanks so much hon!

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vulcanicity December 27 2008, 21:41:47 UTC
*uses tissue*
You DEFINITELY should have! :P LMAO.

:)

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katamarann December 26 2008, 18:25:10 UTC
DUDE. Everyone else is writing Santa Smut and you're making me cry! (But in a good way bb...cuz this is only a fraction of how I know we'll ALL cry in a couple months).

The last promise he made to her - breaks in the night.

He drifts after her, is carried along by the current of their love.

He had promised he would stay, that he would survive. But he had also promised her forever. Not just in life.

He finds her on the shore.

*wibbles*

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babylon_whore December 27 2008, 20:27:50 UTC
LOL well trust me, if I attempted santa smut that'd reduce you to tears just as quick.

lalalalalalINDENIALlalalalalaHAPPYENDINGSlalalalaal

Thanks a mil bbcakes!

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missbevcrusher December 26 2008, 18:54:26 UTC
*sob* Omg... that was both heartbreaking and beautiful. There were so many amazing passages in this story. The emotions were very very powerful, I am speechless. Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic.

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babylon_whore December 27 2008, 20:28:31 UTC
Oh thanks so much hon!

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babylon_whore December 27 2008, 20:29:04 UTC
Hee, I want that on my headstone.

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spikesbuffy December 26 2008, 19:25:16 UTC
*iz sobbing mess*

There are not words in the English language to describe just how hauntingly, heart-breakingly beautiful this story is.

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babylon_whore December 27 2008, 20:29:31 UTC
Awww thanks so very much

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karuri December 28 2008, 21:37:37 UTC
*cries again* oh that icon...
Clearly most of us are suckers for romances that *mimics Allen Rickman* end in tears

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spikesbuffy December 28 2008, 23:22:26 UTC
Ain't that the truth!

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