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Title: How Your Heart is Wired

Mar 30, 2009 05:37

Title: How Your Heart is Wired
Beta: alias424
Pairing: A/R
Summary: Everything vibrates at its own frequency.

( How Your Heart is Wired )

babylon_whore fic, rating: t, babylon_whore: one shot

Comments 21

psychicnagger March 30 2009, 08:13:57 UTC

They detonate.

That was them? I thought it was me.

I gotta hand it to you, you sure know how to make parentheses SEXY.

I love you, have I ever told you that before? :)

babylon_whore March 30 2009, 09:03:13 UTC

LOL should I start a different series called Parenthical Sexay?

Thanks a mil bbcakes! I lurve you too!!

gidget_zb March 30 2009, 09:42:47 UTC

*clings*

It's just - so and gah -

this makes me want to write.

babylon_whore March 30 2009, 09:43:43 UTC

this makes me want to write.
You know the comm rule! You say it, you DO IT!!!!!

alias424 March 30 2009, 11:16:48 UTC

HOW YOUR HEART IS WIRED!! Did I get to help pick the title lyric?? Because even with just the maybe thought of it, I feel honored! Which is silly, really, seeing as I feel honored already to have gotten to pretend to edit this piece of genius, but....

Damn, woman. Did I mention that already? And the absolute love for every little bit of this? Your parentheses are magical. The way you carried the magnetic-ness all through this is just....

*is speechless*

*hugs you*

*kiiiiinda misses writing now that I've read this*

babylon_whore March 30 2009, 11:54:27 UTC

Heehee, in fact it WAS your suggestion that made me go with it. I was thinking of that one as it was and you throwing it out there just cemented it!!!

Awww thanks baby *jumps you*

And I'm totally trying to lure you and gidge_zb back into writing...one page at a time....

i_am_davnee March 30 2009, 14:06:55 UTC

LOVE! I adore the way you characterize him and his love for her. It is all-consuming.

They step apart (but never away).

*sniff* Beautiful!

babylon_whore March 30 2009, 20:09:37 UTC

Thanks so much bb!!

I am a stickler for trying to get characterization right!

pandj1958 March 30 2009, 21:10:41 UTC

Ok there is something you should know about me; i'm not a swearer, i don't swear, at all. But i realise that sometimes it adds that little bit of extra emphasis that you feel you need to get across, so right now i'm gonna repress 26 years worth of a strict Grandpa's upbringing and say THIS is fucking brilliant. That is all.

babylon_whore March 31 2009, 19:03:38 UTC

Hee, I induced swearing? LOL, thats probably the first time I've done that in a positive way.

Thanks so very very much hun!