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Title: I'll See Your Heart And Raise You Mine

Jun 08, 2009 08:40

Title: I'll See Your Heart And Raise You Mine
Beta: alias424
Rating: k+
Summary: Life is about reconciliation

A/N: eh, this is a slight departure for me style wise. So bare with me if its crap.
Feedback/Con-Crit is my drug of choice. After caffeine.

( I'll See Your Heart And Raise You Mine )

rating: k+, babylon_whore fic, babylon_whore: one shot

Comments 16

sira01 June 8 2009, 08:56:05 UTC

Frak. You rendered me quite speechless here.
What a beautiful ficlet!!! Yeah, very eloguent. *sigh*
I love the idea how it doesn't take many words just the right ones to change your reality. Words matter. And we should be careful with which ones to choose.
Ah well, never mind me. This is really, really beautiful. *happy sigh*

cocon90 June 8 2009, 18:42:02 UTC

Wow, this is really beautiful. Greeeeat work! :)

ms_elaine_neous June 8 2009, 20:06:53 UTC

Beautifully written. Different but very eloquent and there's something lovely about Laura thinking of herself as Bill's wife. I liked it :).

pandj1958 June 8 2009, 21:20:17 UTC

Brilliant as usual, you have such a wonderful way with words.
You make decisions you do not speak aloud that change this in your inside world. And you forget. That you must push these words out so that they may reshape the world outside

I think i am in love with these lines :)

sleepismyfriend June 9 2009, 01:34:55 UTC

This was just... Guh.. Awesome.. I love the idea of realities in our head versus the reality of reality and how they can expand and contract depending on our actions.

*grins*