south of the river you stop and hold everything

[gidget_zb]

Title: south of the river you stop and hold everything
Fandom/Pairing: Doctor Who, River/Doctor
Rating:  M
Wordcount: 5,602
Summary: "I love a good hammock. Beds. You can swing in. Best thing ever!"

Comments

[betawho]

“I looked at your mouth and lost count because I tend to do that. Not lose count, specifically, but lose my train of thought when I look at your mouth.”

I’ll bet!

Oh, this story was beautiful. Shy, possessive, naughty Doctor, smug, naughty River. And I like how they both agree that they're exclusive. Maybe that makes me old fashioned, but I think it makes it that much more special what they have. Even moreso because it's not dictated by any cultural traditions, but just because they want it that way.

And I liked how River winked at him when he was peeking at her through his fingers. Because, of course he was peeking at her through his fingers! :D

This story sort of reminds me of my " Island Paradise." But, honestly, if they're going to end up on a beach alone, with a hammock. You know they're going to have some fun. :D

[cyndisuesue]

That was one magnificent read!

[lonewytch]

Mmmm, that was lovely. Such a beautiful and romantic setting, i loved the description of the planet - them just being together somewhere lovely and having fun, being close.

There was so much love in that, i adore how you portray their fierce devotion to each other. Jealous!Doctor is adorable and i love how River tells him she is only ever for him.

And it's hot in a really tender and romantic way.

Love your fics, always. ♥

[a_celeste]

Oh, you, you even had him put her over his shoulder... FAVOURITE THINGS IN FIC ALWAYS. And I love that you always tie up the ending instead of well smut for the sake of smut, there's an actual story being told instead of just having them do it.

[lylo369]

Yay! Just...YAY