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the coolness of your smile is stirringofbirds between my arms;

Feb 17, 2012 00:49

Title: the coolness of your smile is stirringofbirds between my arms;
Rating: M
Fandom/Characters: Doctor Who, River/Eleven, Rory
Wordcount: 7,680
Summary: “Did you really think I’d accept that, River?” - 6x07 AU add-in

( but i should rather than anything have(almost when hugeness will shut quietly)almost, your kiss )

one-shot, rating: m, gidget fic, fandom: doctor who

Comments 21

violettavalery February 17 2012, 11:17:56 UTC

Woke up from a bad dream at 4 am, saw you posted this and my GOSH, I think this is my favorite so far. It's just the perfect blend of character development and slight smut. And I loved this line so, so much: “Do you think you’ll feel it? All those memories erasing?”

AGH. This was perfect. You are awesome. The end.

gidget_zb February 17 2012, 12:56:22 UTC

OH GOD THAT LINE KILLED ME. STUPID DOCTOR.

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gidget_zb February 17 2012, 12:56:48 UTC

Aww thank you.:)

jadethe2nd February 17 2012, 14:00:34 UTC

Ahhh so I could have been writing but I read this instead. And I'm so glad I did. So heartbreaking but of course that's what makes the ending worth it.

And I am ashamed at how much your awfulbad "how much Timelord is in you" pun made me lol. Cause really, that is TERRIBLE. BUT I LOVE IT.

darling_ashes February 17 2012, 15:57:48 UTC

Perfect and lovely. Perfect and lovely! PERFECT. LOVELY. Those are the two adjectives that have been on repeat in my head when reading this.

Angst and happy make up sex. Wonderful!! Perfect add-in to 6x07.

kesjcv February 17 2012, 17:31:30 UTC

It always makes me so happy to see you've posted a new fic! :D This was... wow. My favourite bit is:

Her hands are gentle where his are not, and she smoothes them over his chest. I love him. I love him. I love him. He doesn’t know. None of this seems to help, so instead she pictures Berlin. She pictures him dying in front of her and trying to rescue her with his last breath. Her arms wrap around him and she opens her mouth fully at that, swallowing his anger and taking it for her own.

Truly, absolutely, heart-wrenchingly, painfully, scorchingly beautiful. xxxxxxx