but my body was loose and i was set alight

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Title: but my body was loose and i was set alight
Fandom/Characters: Doctor Who, River/Eleven
Rating:  M  
Wordcount: 5,995
Summary: “Is she going to be your wife one day?” Amy was asking archly and River could hear the Doctor’s sigh.
“Yes.” River’s face dropped in shock and she scrambled to peek around the doorframe to watch them. He was leaning with

Comments

[repowoman24]

I can't believe you were debating with yourself with this one for so long. I loveloveloved it so much.

The way you wrote their feelings toward each other in the Doctor's early days was adorable. The level of patience River has with him (which you explain well in here) is amazing. Even if he completely screwed up their timeline, she would still love him.

And then, of course, there's the smut. The way he asks her to use his name, the way he can't stop touching her, the way he is just so drawn to her, the heels, everything. To me, the Doctor's first time with River would be pretty damn hot. Maybe not the most exciting, but UNF nevertheless, which you proved here. Quite well.

[welshred]

So sweet and very believable. I loved it!

I love how awed he is by touching and seeing her. Gorgeous.

And also, the shoes....Hnnnnnnng.

[jadethe2nd]

Oh Charina. I was going to write tonight, but then you wrote and I had to read and now I have no time to write but that's all right because reading this was time very well spent. *nods*

It's lovely. Such a nice twist on the canon and I love River's reflections so early in his timeline. AND THE SHOES. And the Clerics uniform, poor dear. And how she is so wary of taking things so far and rewriting time and it's all just gorgeous.

[victoriagrayson]

BEST BIRTHDAY GIFT EVER! <3333

I love it so much Charina thank you. It was wonderful. I wanted to cry at some bits.

[easytheretyger]

Your smut fics make my heart all fuzzy. Really loved this one. <3