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there was too much fire in your two voices

Jun 06, 2012 08:46

Title: there was too much fire in your two voices
Pairing: River/Doctor
Rating: M
Wordcount: 5,552
Warnings: voyeurism
Summary: “She invites herself into my TARDIS, turnabout is fair play and all that - surely she’d be happy to see me,” he quickens his pace as he mutters to himself.

( there was too much fire in your two voices )

one-shot, rating: m, gidget fic, fandom: doctor who

Comments 12

darling_ashes June 6 2012, 14:56:57 UTC

That was wonderful! and lovely! and hot! I love that they both knew the Doctor was there (and loved it too). Oh my kinky OTP, how wonderful you are.

I loved it!

But the end referencing Hungry Earth/Cold Blood just killed me.

betawho June 6 2012, 15:38:56 UTC

“Has she got another man here?”

My first thought was, OH God no! Time voyeurism? Is he going to be spying on himself?

“His hair is a touch longer and less fluffy - really he can’t wait to figure that bit the hell out”

Hah! Love it!

This is exactly the sort of ridiculous situation the Doctor would find himself in.

Good God! That was HOT!

Poor innocent Doctor, but he definitely knows what’s in store for him now. Talk about incentive!

That was great, I’d never really even thought about the possibility of him accidentally seeing himself with River. But as timey-wimey as their relationship is, I guess it was practically inevitable. Great story, very well written. Both funny and hot and yet still intimate and sexy.

welshred June 6 2012, 18:58:35 UTC

You BROKE me.

Gorgeous, loving, sweet and so fucking hot. Also your description of River's curves....Glorious.

tasty_kate June 7 2012, 00:37:42 UTC

GUH. I am dead. This was just perfect. Some plot in a porny sense and just general hotness. Thanks so much for sharing!

nibbleswicke June 7 2012, 08:38:33 UTC

Oh the timey wimey-ness of it all! Gloriously sexy and genuinely funny, that's a hard match to find! The Doctor's inner monologue was absolutely precious, very true to eternal nine year old. "Well I didn't want to see her anyway." Oh the pout that would have graced that petulant face.

No joke, I actually cracked up laughing when he let that moan escape. "Did you hear something, sweetie?" "Oh, don't worry, that's just my younger self getting his rocks off in the closet." Only in this fandom hehehe and I love that!

Loved the poignantly painful but thankfully brief interlude wherein the younger Doctor gains a small insight into their relationship from River's perspective. Because I'm a glutton for dramatics, I adore those moments of crushing sadness, but I always appreciate how you're able to deftly balance the insane emotional tableau these two present.

Wonderful work, so very very pleased with it! I'll definitely be back for a reread hehehe