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FIC: Boys, After Hours (Lotrips, Billy/Orlando, NC-17)

Aug 06, 2006 03:09

Boys, After Hours
Author: telesilla
Fandom: Lotrips
Characters: Billy Boyd/Orlando Bloom
Word Count: 3.551 words
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not RL; didn't happen. If you think this has anything to do with the real actors involved, then you need to put down the crack pipe.
Summary: While in San Francisco to shoot a movie, Orlando visits a sex toy store and ( Read more... )

Comments 12

angiepen August 6 2006, 20:43:49 UTC

I don't usually read Billy, nor do I consider him to be terribly attractive, but I enjoyed your treatment of him. This was hot, but very low-key at the same time. More a bed of radiant coals than a roaring fire, and I get the impression it could last quite a while. For what little there is of this, it feels like it could be the beginning of a long-term relationship. Good job.

Angie

elfin_saltwater August 7 2006, 00:14:04 UTC

Very enjoyable and hot. Not a pairing I usually read, but this was very enjoyable.

v_angelique August 7 2006, 02:57:05 UTC

Oh fucking hell love, you've done it again! And this time its with my stories, so I feel quite honoured. I love the way you've written Billy as a top, and also how you portray Orlando as being a bit vain but essentially good at heart. I can't stand "shallow" Orlandos, and you've got him just the way I like him. Complex.

Oh, and this line--it seemed almost obscene to whine to himself about not getting it up the ass on a semi-regular basis. Replace the "girlfriend" part with "boyfriend" and change "getting it up the ass" to "getting pussy", backtrack about two years, and oh my God I know exactly how he feels. *g*

half_elf_lost August 7 2006, 03:39:08 UTC

Great job. I like how you give Orlando some introspection (Christ, but I'm vain. and Billy is experienced and smart (Will you give me the chance to try and earn that from you?)/

strongplacebo August 7 2006, 14:29:42 UTC

Frngh. You handled this pairing really really well and I find that impressive since I have recently (about half and hour ago) vosed never to attempt it again.

Oh God, that whole thing about what Orlando will and will not do and then the last line...

I repeat, frngh.