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Jul 16, 2011 14:26

I know - I rarely post here and even more rarely write-fic, but I'm doing this meme anyway. It's a 30 questions/Question a day writing meme, but I'm doing it all now. I need the distraction.

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skipthedemon July 16 2011, 19:18:26 UTC
24- Well, now I'm curious what character said "I love you" to who, in this story.

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fandom_me July 16 2011, 19:19:39 UTC
I don't remember. I was mostly using it as an example of the punctuation, not the actual words.

Speech tags were broken. He said. is not a sentence and does not need a period - or to be there if there's a period inside quotes ;-)

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skipthedemon July 16 2011, 19:21:24 UTC
Ohhh, I thought you it was a characterization critique, not grammar. <.

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donutsweeper July 16 2011, 19:31:16 UTC
Riker/Chakotay- I never actually even considered this pairing before. It probably helps that I've read next to nothing in either fandom, but still. They could be very interesting together.

Ah, Jack. Yep, the man muses were made for. *sighs happily*

Which fest was Naked for?

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fandom_me July 16 2011, 19:32:10 UTC
You know, I don't remember? It's probably still on the header but um. I'm going to be lazy ;-) Actually, thinking about it, it was some exchange thing.

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donutsweeper July 16 2011, 19:35:32 UTC
That was the Jack/Nine, getting Jack to drop his mask one?

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fandom_me July 16 2011, 19:35:57 UTC
Yeah.

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