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fandoria

Teaser Tuesday

Feb 15, 2011 14:15

Today's teaser is actually over on onegrapeshy 's page along with the rest of the Grapemo teasers, but I thought I'd share it here too. This one is in Rider's POV. (Again, please look past the very rough draft-ness of it all).

Feeling eyes on me, I looked up expecting to see Sage, but she was too preoccupied with Grey Wolf. No, it was Father. He stood ( Read more... )

dreamwalker, in a sharing mood

Comments 9

meredith_wood February 15 2011, 19:52:24 UTC

*sigh* Poor Rider. He's in so much pain, so torn. :-(

fandoria February 16 2011, 00:29:33 UTC

And it's only going to get harder. Because I am mean.

meredith_wood February 16 2011, 02:09:11 UTC

You're not mean. You're a good writer who knows how to create emotions and tension for the reader. :-)

music_lover3 February 15 2011, 20:30:43 UTC

Great snippet! I thought it was good and now I want to know more!

fandoria February 16 2011, 00:29:41 UTC

Thank you!

laurenem6 February 15 2011, 22:03:55 UTC

I feel his pain. Nice teaser.

fandoria February 16 2011, 00:29:48 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

edgyauthor February 15 2011, 23:25:29 UTC

Great teaser! I love Rider's angst. It makes it so easy to feel for him...

fandoria February 16 2011, 00:30:09 UTC

Thanks. This was one of the few scenes of his that was actually easy to write.