Supernatural: From a Whisper to a Scream [1/1]

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Title: From a whisper to a scream. [1/1]
Author: Rae
Rating: PG-13 for liberal use of the f-word.
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Dean, gen. Can be read with a Sam/Dean slant.
Warnings/Spoilers: Set in 4x04 but goes AU.
Disclaimer: This work is a piece of complete fiction, all characters are property of the CW and Kripke.
Summary: To be honest, Sam was a

Comments

[partaymon5]

Oh wow! Very good, I really enjoyed that, especially that last bit. I think Sam has a lot of bottled up anger in him and some of it must be directed toward Dean, after all, Dean got chosen by the 'good' side, while Sam was the one with the faith. Totally loved this take on things!

[autumnrae89]

Yeah, for me, Sam was just too cool about it. Like he had no conviction in what he was doing, like he really didn't feel like he was saving anyone. He needs to push harder. Plus I love angry!Sam. :P

Thank you for the lovely comment. :)

[floppy_panda]

Interesting story but the light grey text was pretty difficult to read which spoiled the flow of the narrative. I ended up having to highlight the text just to read sams thoughts Good story though. (Sorry don't mean to appear negative.)

[credulesque]

UM...HI *FLAILS* this was awesome, Super-R!

There was a roll of primal satisfaction for Sam as the people in the motel seemed to back away from Sam on his approach. They were scared, scared of the power he had.

Basically, that DESCRIBES Sam when he's gone all powers!badass and shit, awesome (:

And Dean's how goes it in the nunnery? SUCH A DEAN THING TO SAY, you totally captured them here.

OH BOYS, *CLUTCHES HEART*
And that last bit intrigues me, who's the maid? ♥

[saavikam77]

Oh, boys!! *huggles them* This seems to be the story of the season, doesn't it? *sigh*

Bravo!!