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Smallville: You and I [1/1]

Apr 01, 2009 06:14

Title: You and I. [1/1]
Author: Rae
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Clark, Lois; Clark/Lois
Warnings/Spoilers: Set post Hex, minor spoilers.
Disclaimer: DC Comics/ The CW are the owners of these characters therein I am not and shall not be sued.
Summary: Lois fights a losing battle with her feelings for Clark.
Author Notes: I do love my add-ons don’ ( Read more... )

clark/lois, fanfic, smallville

Comments 9

svgurl April 1 2009, 06:58:19 UTC

Awww, I love this! I really like how you write Lois and Clark ... you get into Lois's head so well. How she wants to build up walls against Clark but he just manages to keep breaking them without knowing it. :D

And the ending! She kissed him! Though I am curious to what he's thinking of the kiss. ;)

Wonderful job!

autumnrae89 April 1 2009, 07:07:04 UTC

...he just manages to keep breaking them without knowing it.

This. For me, that's always been Clark's charm, Lois said it best of course, "Clumsy but cute." So completely unaware of his epicness.

I know! I was surprised. But it worked, how else was Lois going to make Clark uncomfortable? :P

By my reckoning though, he's still standing there. :D Maybe'll write his POV later today.

eternal_moonie April 1 2009, 07:52:09 UTC

First off, are you going to continue the Kara/Oliver fanfic you've posted sometime earlier? Second, this story was totally awesome! Well done!!

autumnrae89 April 1 2009, 13:04:40 UTC

I totally am. It's just a little mad at the moment with me signing up to do smallvillebbang and trying to update all my WIPs. It will happen, I promise. :)

Thanks! What can I say? The Clois speaks volumes. :P

brdwaybebe April 1 2009, 07:58:54 UTC

Swooooon. Can I hire you for the next episode please? We need some of THAT on Smallville - FOR SURE.

Nicely done!

emeraldstag April 1 2009, 08:42:53 UTC

I loved that ending! And the 'didn't need a hex' line from Lois. ♥

You could build another Luthor mansion with all the walls these two build up and tear down all the time. @_@

oatmeal_cookie April 1 2009, 11:31:17 UTC

It was as if that attention, that need, had created this part of Lois that couldn’t deny Clark anything. She sat secretly in fear everyday that he would find out and use it against her.

This is beautiful, and oh Lois, don't worry because he loves you too. Your heart, everything you have, everything you feel for him is safe. ♥

I love this add-on! I wanted Clark to go after her too, and I love their conversation and Lois finally giving in. OMG and they kissed! Aww, I'd love to see what Clark thinks about that. ;)

Excellent work!