Smallville: I dare you to move

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Title: I dare you to move
Author: Rae
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Clark/Lois, Chloe/Jimmy, Oliver and Lana.
Warnings/Spoilers: Some spoilers for 8x10. Also it gets a bit angst-y in the middle too.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and have never claimed to do so.
Summary: It’s Chloe’s special day but it brings things to a head for Clark and Lois as

Comments

[x_spikeaholic_x]

That was so good! If only the actual episode could be like that :)

[autumnrae89]

Sorry it took me so long to reply. Got the dreaded cold!

Yeah, one day we are going to have proper Clois. No BS. :D Thing is, I think that day is soon! :P

[cuyler_morgan]

too cute!!!

[autumnrae89]

I know. I could just huggle them both!

[thekiller00]

WOW ! Talk about a lot of tension.

[autumnrae89]

*g*

Yeah, but they always make up.

[svgurl]

That was so adorable! I love the way you write Clark and Lois. And I'm glad that Lana was supportive. After all, she did see the signs way back in s4. ;)

Chloe's wedding was nice and I enjoyed the Chlo-Lo. I liked the Chlark friendship too. That was a nice touch.

“Tell me Smallville, is there anything you do well?” Lois called from the bathroom as she applied her make up for the day ahead.

“Saving your ass.” Clark mumbled, agitated by how late they were going to be.

“What was that?” Lois called.

Clark shook his head, “Nothing, Lois, but if you don’t hurry up we won’t be leaving this century.”

The dialogue was fantastic! Those two are just so cute. :D

Ollie and Lois dancing was sweet. Them being friends was good ... I'm guessing Ollie's mystery woman is Dinah. ;)

The ending was perfect. Lois telling Clark about her lingerie cracked me up.

Wonderful job! I was so happy to see you had new Clois fic up! :D

[autumnrae89]

We always need more Chlo-Lo. Reminds me to put it on my fic to-do list. So sick of the hate. :(

I can't write Ollie as anything other than awesome because... he's awesome. :D

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Sorry got on a Ollie tangent there in my brain.

So as always *HUGGLESMISH* for all your lovely comments.

[saavikam77]

Awwww!! :) This was perfectly sweet. I love how clueless they both were. XD Silly Clois.

[autumnrae89]

That's the thing about them two. You could set off a romantic bomb in front of them and they wouldn't notice.

Clois is and has always been the ultimate love is blind story. :D