Estranged 2/?

[demosthenes91]

Author: demosthenes91
Title: Estranged
Rating: R for language, but I expect that might go up...
Pairing H/Hr
Notes: Angsty, post-war, EWE

Part 1

Comments

[madderbrad]

A nice aftermath and intermission ... and next chapter ... PLOTTING THE REVENGE!!! Yes? Well, what-they're-going-to-do-next, at any rate?

Just like I found the hug to be the pivotal gesture of the first chapter I likewise enjoyed the attention you brought to the second Harry-initiated-hug in this one. I think we H/Hr fans have always wanted Harry to show more appreciation for Hermione, be a little more demonstrative on his side. It's good to see Harry initiate a Granger-class hug off his own bat.

Using Teddy to highlight Hermione's absence from Harry's life was a good idea (and cute, too!).

[asweetdownfall]

Eeee, I love this chapter SFM. (And gosh, 'bout time Harry showed more appreciation for Hermione!)

The ending, with Hermione brushing her fingers through his scalp? Guhhhh. That was perfect. <3

(I still wonder what's up with the Weasleys. Gah.)

[greydawning]

I loved your explanation for how Harry ended up looking for Hermione. It's so refreshing to read about how much he appreciates and misses her. And, of course, Teddy is just plain adorable :)

Now I really, really, REALLY need to know what's up with the Weasleys...and what H/Hr are going to do about it.

[ladybluestar]

Ah yes, very nice indeed to see Harry's POV in this chapter.

Those scheming Weasley women. I'm sure that Hermione will find some sort of suitable retribution, now that the truth is out and Harry is by her side.

Adorable with Teddy.

[kudosirony]

Aww, Teddy! He's the only kid I think is cute.

Interesting story...ugh, dumb Weasley's. I don't like when Ron is the evil one, but I have no problem with Mrs Weasley or Ginny.