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The Sequel: Part V

Apr 03, 2007 23:45

Title: 'The Sequel'
Fandom: Desperate Housewives
Pairings: Bree Van deKamp, Tom and Lynette Scavo
Chapter: Part V
Rating: N17/N18/R/X-Rated!!
Author's Note: From a technical point, there is some pretty great writing in this chapter. Not to pat my own back or anything. :P

( Enjoy. )

Comments 11

cdsdralion April 4 2007, 04:21:56 UTC

Okay a quick comment before I go to bed!

This story is such an emotional rollercoaster. This chapter is more my speed but I know there is more grit to come along. I welcome it, as I am interested in seeing where this all goes.

Good work!

fanfictess April 4 2007, 13:37:46 UTC

*squee!* Your icon rocks. That's hysterical.

Thanks, it's good to see you back on here. :D

I love hot baths anonymous April 4 2007, 09:13:11 UTC

Believe me or not but THIS is exactly (with some details different, of course!) what I had pictured (I hope you will understand me...I always wonder how you can...)!
Once again, I ask you: DO YOU READ MY SICK BRAIN FROM CANADA?

You're story is a masterpiece!!!

Re: I love hot baths fanfictess April 4 2007, 13:39:52 UTC

*grin* Thank you.

And re: emails...I'm not ignoring you, I promise. I keep getting interrupted/distracted each time I go to reply!!

felicity_fan April 4 2007, 10:18:49 UTC

Now I caught myself not breathing in the end... which is not the end, right?
So well done, hon'

fanfictess April 4 2007, 13:40:23 UTC

Nope, it's not. Though I have no idea where they're going from here. ;) Thanks!

lemursexbot April 4 2007, 13:26:19 UTC

I don't even usually like femslash, and you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for each new installment. Brava!

fanfictess April 4 2007, 13:41:02 UTC

What a compliment! Thank you. :D Nice to see you, too!

marciacross4eve April 4 2007, 15:29:45 UTC

All I can say is....Wow....once again I LOVED it! You just keep outdoing urself with each new chapter! You are seriously a very talented writer! I love actually reading fics that are written with proper grammer, sentence structure, and punctuation! Anyway you are still my hero...keep up the amazing writing!! *cheers*

hugs, MC4ever

fanfictess April 4 2007, 18:09:42 UTC

Thank you.

I agree, I too like to read fics (and I don't read many as is) that are properly written. It's such a shame that fanfic writers seem to think that it's okay to completely forego all sense of technicality just because they are writing for a fandom. It makes me sad.

Anyway, thanks again! :D
xx