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The Sequel: Part VI

Apr 07, 2007 16:20

Title: 'The Sequel'
Fandom: Desperate Housewives
Pairings: Bree Van deKamp, Tom and Lynette Scavo
Chapter: Part VI
Rating: N17 (pretty calm chapter)
Author's Note: A wee bit of Brex - just some thoughts from Bree.

( Enjoy. )

Comments 13

felicity_fan April 7 2007, 20:39:19 UTC

“Eat your eggs.” Bree nearly dropped her coffee as she looked up at Lynette sharply. Obviously, the woman was a mind reader as well as a perverted sadist. Cursing under her breath, Bree put the coffee down and lowered her face to the plate, shoveling eggs into her mouth and feeling her cheeks burn with embarrassment. Lynette watched Bree struggle with a smile on her face. “That’s my girl.”

In those three words, Rex Van deKamp was completely forgotten.

My favourite paragraph.
What more is there for Bree to go through?! --I read everytime with my mouth open... you're that good.

fanfictess April 7 2007, 22:31:21 UTC

I like that paragraph too. I actually had a different scenerio in mind for that last paragraph but this ended up writing itself which just goes to say that it's true...I really *don't* have a clue what I'm going to write until it's being written.

I'm asking myself the very same question. What more will Bree have to endure to survive this weekend? ;)

I'm really enjoying your urban pictures... keep posting! :D

Wonderful anonymous April 7 2007, 21:13:37 UTC

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful...

You're wonderful!

And I'm hungry, now...

Thank you. :D fanfictess April 7 2007, 22:29:49 UTC

*giggle* I went home and ate dinner after posting this! ;)

cdsdralion April 8 2007, 04:51:27 UTC

That was a really good chapter. I especially loved the imagery of Bree cooking.

This line had to be my fave: The eggs were perfectly beaten and made with cream so they rose like fluffy clouds, begging to be forked and eaten.

hehe!

Good work!

fanfictess April 8 2007, 15:27:03 UTC

Thanks! I had fun writing it. :D

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fanfictess April 8 2007, 23:43:24 UTC

I do...though it's always nice to hear it. :D

Instead of general compliments, I'm always open to hearing 'my favourite part was...' from my readers. That's something new you could do! ;) Helpful, aren't I?

lemursexbot April 8 2007, 20:12:07 UTC

I hate food and sex together. BUT but you made food sexy, damn you. ;) And not just any food but breakfast food. Gah!

fanfictess April 8 2007, 23:44:05 UTC

Bree + Breakfast = seXAY!

That can't really be helped. ;)

Thank you, thank you.