The Sequel: Part VII

[fanfictess]

Title: 'The Sequel'
Fandom: Desperate Housewives
Pairings: Bree Van deKamp and Lynette Scavo
Chapter: Part VII
Rating: N18
Author's Note: This chapter is calm until the very end, then it deals with some pretty kinky issues - please keep that in mind.

Comments

[marciacross4eve]

Omg I feel special to be the first to comment!!!! YAY!! Anyway yet another good chapter....but I really want to come hunt u down and sit on you now until u tell me what happens next......CLIFFHANGER!!! evil u!! ;-) I love the part when lynette came downstairs all dressed looking "lynette" like again and Bree got all nervous and felt "un-bree-like"!!! I think i've said this so much already but I can't help it.....you are an Awesome writer!!!

Keep it up hun, you rock!!!

hugs, mc4ever

[fanfictess]

*grin* Yes, you all hate me for my 'To Be Continued' obsession. And, as I'm sure you've figured out by now, I love finding situations in which I can just say "oh well TBC...sorry!" and leave you all screaming. It satisfies the sadist in me. *lol* Thanks for reading luv!

Aaaarghh!

[anonymous]

My favourite part is the "flesh-made" table story! You know, what's fantastic in your fics, except of course, your so INCREDIBLY sensual style, is details like the horoscope. You describe (oh! my god! is that right or am I making myself ridiculous once again?) your charcacters like real human beings, and that's why we love them so much.
If I had Bree as a piece of furniture, I would make her a table, a sofa, a bed, and... Oh! I know, a breakfast tray... you know, across the bed...
OK, I'm dreaming a little... Who doesn't?
Can't wait for the next part!
You're amazing, like always!

Re: Aaaarghh!

[fanfictess]

I love the idea of Bree as a breakfast tray. I actually had thought of something similar for Part VI but it ended up writing itself differently. This story has a mind of its own!!

I feel guilty for completely ignoring your email... but trust me, it's not that I'm ignoring you, I just haven't much more time in the evening other than to try to write a part of this story. I'll get to it soon, I hope! xox

[felicity_fan]

Oh my! Poor, poor Bree! And yet, go, Lynette, go!
i just came back from school, breakfast on my table, opened lj and here it was - your story, so perfectly breakfast-ly :) Anyway, perfect thing to begin a day with - good piece of fanfictess' fic.
But, for god's sake, DECIDE (!!!) what will happen next and write. Pretty, pretty, please;)

[fanfictess]

Your 'go Lynette go' made me grin, I love that you're rooting for her. Everyone is rooting for Bree and hating Lynette so it's nice to see someone who doesn't hate her. :) Glad to have been able to provide some morning reading for you! :D

[fanfictess]

You didn't tell me which was your favourite part!

[fanfictess]

Lovely! Thank you.

And you're right, it is unlike her to want to stay.... maybe she won't. ;)