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The Sequel: Part IX

Apr 16, 2007 23:18

Title: 'The Sequel'
Fandom: Desperate Housewives
Pairings: Bree Van deKamp and Lynette Scavo
Chapter: Part IX
Rating: PG-13ish
Author's Note: MORE Very. very. emo. Angsty. Sad. Boo hoo. :(

( Enjoy. )

Comments 7

felicity_fan April 17 2007, 11:39:24 UTC

ouch
you're right, I'm feelingmore for Lynette than for Bree. I know Bree goes through a lot in your story, but Lynette took the risk and you describe it so well that even though there are not many mentions of Lynette's name in this part, I can feel the emptiness and disappointment inside her...

w00t! fanfictess April 17 2007, 17:45:51 UTC

The fact that you feel this way and understand that layer of this story means I've done my job and done it well. Hoorah! ;) Thank you so much for reading. :D

Re: w00t! felicity_fan April 17 2007, 18:51:34 UTC

oh no no, I thank you for writing :)
and yes - you are a genious at it alone AND also on the subtly educative level.

(I have a strong feeling that there is something grammaicaly very wrong, but I count on you that you will take the best from it - 'cause it's one of my best non-emo compliments:)

Re: w00t! fanfictess April 17 2007, 22:45:29 UTC

I understood what you meant. ;) Thank you!

marciacross4eve April 18 2007, 02:45:48 UTC

This was GREAT!!! When I first started reading this story I wasn't hugely into it, cuz I was mad at Lynette for being so cruel to Bree, but she's not...she's just helping her!! This part was so sad...I just wanted to hug Lynette.....and now Bree's all back to her perfect little self!!!

Great writing...I now luv this story....very addicted to it!!!

*hugs*

p.s. thanks for the b-day wish on MSN....I was out shopping!!! Ur a sweetie!!!

fanfictess April 18 2007, 03:46:04 UTC

I'm glad you're beginning to understand the dynamic now. :) I'm so proud of myself for changing all of you readers around! You were all sooo angry with Lynette and shocked that she would do such a thing.

And I have to say, Bree's not quite perfect - did you notice that she started to drink again? Uh oh. :(

Thanks!!

I hope you bought all sorts of things, it's your birthday - you deserve it!
xx

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fanfictess April 18 2007, 14:18:14 UTC

Best compliment of yours yet! You're getting the hang of this. ;) Thank you... I figured that, though Bree wouldn't be in this situation with Lynette in the first place (not even the kissing/holding hands situation)... I had to go back to her true character. The Bree Van deKamp we all know would suppress those dark desires until the day she died, rather than have the possibility of people finding out her debasement. And I have to say, I love the fact she's drinking again. So sad, so emo... so Bree. ;)

PS - LOVE the icon!!