The Sequel: Finale!!

[fanfictess]

Title: 'The Sequel'
Fandom: Desperate Housewives
Pairings: Bree Van deKamp and Lynette Scavo
Chapter: Part X - finale!
Rating: PG-13ish
Author's Note: I know this icon is from 'Bang' and it's totally out of context but I had to find a 'sad Lynette' looking picture in a hurry and this is all I could find and then I had to make an icon by myself!! (

Comments

[marciacross4eve]

OMG I really don't even know what to say?!?! I can't find the words to explain my reaction! I loved this story...even though I'm usually into the mushy-smutty-kissy-lovey stuff....this was amazing....very well written...you can definitely be proud of this story! I loved it, it was NEVER what I had expected, it tooks me on a lot of twists and turns, but that's what made it a great story! I'm sad to see the end but I understand that it has to end somewhere....writing's a form of art and just like my art projects get completed so do stories!!! Anyway I loved it as you can tell and I am looking forward to any more stories your great mind comes up with!!!:)

hugs-n-kisses, mc4ever

[fanfictess]

Thank you! On one hand, I'm sorry to see this story go and I'm also sorry to see that it went this way. But I am eager to start something fresh. Ten chapters!! The longest story I've written so far and it certainly took the longest amount of time! Honestly, I didn't plan this ending. It just... happened. :) Like most of my stories, this one had a life of it's own and I'm as disappointed and sad for Lynette as the rest of you. But I do think it was the right way to go. I'm glad to hear I had you on the edge of your seat every time - what a compliment. :D

[felicity_fan]

You know what? It was amazing. I expected Bree to come back till the last line and I felt so so sorry for Lynette. The parts where you described her state of mind - the disapointement, numbness and all the emotions of failing and losing her person - it all felt so real.

Wonderful work *claps her hands*

(In my mind Bree comes back eventually, 'cause I can't stay to see Lynette suffer for long)

[fanfictess]

I love love LOVE that you were all feeling so sorry for Bree at the beginning of this fic originally (in Bree's Pearls) and now Lynette's had her heart broken and you're all rooting for her. YAY! I love that I've twisted your little hearts around my pinky finger and made you feel sorry for the Cruel Woman. ;)

Thank you for such a thorough comment! I very much appreciate you pointing those things out and complimenting me on them. As for Bree - as I said, this story isn't over forever.... so anything could happen. :D

[fanfictess]

Great comment!! You're getting to be a pro at all this commenting business! ;)

Thank you so much; I'm very proud to hear that I've not only tugged at your heartstrings but made you feel involved in the story. To be honest, as you've been, it was quite a bit harder to write entire chapters based solely on emotions without any sex involved! *lol* But seeing that you can all appreciate a good story with or without the sex, I think I'll continue to write more involved plotlines (but don't worry, there will still be copious amounts of sex!).

xx

[fanfictess]

Thank you thank you thank you! :D I liked it too. We very rarely see angry and hurt Lynette but think of "ding dong" or "I will do to your spine what I just did to your front door" and that alongside some deep deep sorrow is what I was going for here. ;)

[mckt]

All I can say at the moment is beautiful. The finale is so beautifully written. You have once again managed to capture Lynette's emotions perfectly. And I love it. I did get teary eyed when I read it. It was wonderful! Hope you post more stories soon! I can't wait to see what other stories your brilliant mind has come up with.

[fanfictess]

Teary eyed?! YES!! My life is complete! ;) *lol*

Thank you, I'm impressed that I managed to reach in and squeeze your heart. Impressed and pleased with myself. ;)Thank you for reading, for commenting, for being so loyal to read everything I write and for crying! Heehee.