{Fic} Softened edges and blurred lines (1D, Harry/Louis, NC-17)

[fangie_yin]

(this one only took two months!)

Fandom: 1D
Title: Softened edges and blurred lines
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17 (idk, it was supposed to be comfort!fic and then the end turned into overstimulation; hashtag oops)
Summary: The iTunes festival brings everything to a head, and Louis needs to bridge the distance between Harry and him.
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Comments

[charcharberry]

Oh my god this was absolutely amazing, I was actually just in the mood for the intimate lovemaking fic and then I thought I'd check livejournal quickly before I went to my bookmarks and I found this and it was beyond perfect. I just love how personal it was to them and how harry took care of Harry and their jealousy and Harry's just letting louis let it all out in the shower and it was so hot Urgh but also sweet and loving and perfect. Seriously so well written and flowed well and was interesting and was fluffy without using flowery words and and being sappy and cheesy, like it was heart squeezing and adorable but realistic and sexy too. Wow I cannot give you enough compliments for this fic. It actually just combined some of my favourite things (jealous louis and caring harry and overstimulation and crying during sex and sex being so much more than getting off and aftercare in showers and snuggling and just two boys in love) I am rambling on the extreme right now but I just thought you deserved to know how I felt about it because you

[fangie_yin]

Wow, thank you so much, it makes me really happy that you enjoyed it and that it cheered you up, it means a lot!! This comment definitely made my week :D

[nuclearsex]

holy jesus. this is beautiful and raw and so intimate! i absolutely loved this.

[naughticals]

i just... wow. wow. wow. wow. wow. wow.

[las109]

oh goodness this was so so so so wonderful. exactly what i needed right now. it's been a rough few days, and the time period of this fic was tough too so i really appreciated this. i love the way you portrayed them and their dynamic and how layered and kind of complicated it is, but it's still wonderful and perfect. ugh. the sex was hot but intimate and loving - just glorious. also i just have the biggest thing for louis being needy/desperate/jealous and harry taking care of him and you painted all that just perfectly - very believable. i also just loved the emphasis on their bond

[zeraparker]

Oooooh! I love this. Everything about it.
Like, there's so much helpless anger and power between them at the beginning, so much force at keeping that distance and isolation, and then it all just melts and falls apart around them. I love how Louis is still the one directing what's going to happen but lets Harry act it all out and just *gives in*, and yes, he admires that trust Harry has in him but he also has that same trust in Harry.
And plus, guh, it's just hot okay. Just hot :P