I happened to stumble upon this when I was taking a study break from writing a monstrous paper. And I love it! It's just what I needed at 3 in the morning to help me feel better about being up this late doing homework. And that means a lot. Keep up the good work and I hope you can update soon (although I obviously understand the school thing)!
Hope the paper went well (mine's in the beginning stages, oh my). I can't make any promises, but at the latest I am looking to post sometime on the week of Thanksgiving. Hopefully before then, you know, giving me more reasons to procrastinate.
"I know, it's less light and fluffy than the first part."
I actually liked this part better than the first (if that's even possible). The tension between them in this part is deliciously palpable! I adored it! This was my favorite part...
"Her words barely sound harsh, let alone biting. He smirks at her, brushing her arm as he moves by on his way to the kitchen. She wonders if he knows it will drive her insane for the rest of the night, trying to figure out if the touch was intentional or accidental-or did he even notice it at all?"
The fact the she couldn't stop thinking about it was a great character insight.
I didn't mind the slightly more angsty tone of this piece at all. I thought it was quite good. Blair obsessing over what their brief touch meant, if anything, was a nice bit. Very in character. Off to part three! :D
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I actually liked this part better than the first (if that's even possible). The tension between them in this part is deliciously palpable! I adored it! This was my favorite part...
"Her words barely sound harsh, let alone biting. He smirks at her, brushing her arm as he moves by on his way to the kitchen. She wonders if he knows it will drive her insane for the rest of the night, trying to figure out if the touch was intentional or accidental-or did he even notice it at all?"
The fact the she couldn't stop thinking about it was a great character insight.
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